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Reviews for Carbon

By : Mikastarlight
  • From ichigokun on September 26, 2010
    Very good second chapter. I like how your theory on Yusuke's demon heritage awakening converges with mine- i.e., making him more bisexual/less heteronormative. I think his reactions to it so far are good, as well as IC.

    I also like the way Kurama is interacting with him.

    Good job!
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  • From ANON - Krystina on September 19, 2010
    Awesome story, the first chapter really got me hooked. Can't wait for the next one.
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  • From ichigokun on September 17, 2010
    I really like this story. A LOT.

    I think that you write Yusuke very well in this scenario.

    Also- most people in Japan are Buddhist/Shinto syncretic: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Religion_in_Japan

    Plus they're not very religious and only do the religious stuff for holidays, weddings, and funerals, more or less.

    Keep up with this, it's awesome!
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  • From kitkit on September 16, 2010
    i like the story..can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From geeclock on September 16, 2010
    Good first chapter, you got a good set up and a hook. I can't wait to see where this is going-- well I have some idea. I did read the warnings after all, but it's like riding a rollercoaster. You know there's gonna be loopy-loops, ya just don't know how fast your gonna take em or if they're gonna make ya wet your pants. Uh, I think I lost the metaphore somewhere in there. Oh well. Keep writing.
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