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Reviews for Carbon

By : Mikastarlight
  • From kitkit on December 11, 2010
    love it..im glad kuwabara was ok with yusuke being gay.
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  • From ANON - MisYuikya on December 08, 2010
    This story is very awesome. I like how slow everything is going it dosen't feel rush. I can't wai to see what happen next!
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  • From XianaTsuya on December 06, 2010
    Awww poor Yusuke *snickers*
    At least Hiei didn't outright laugh at him.
    pffft lol
    And I'm with Yusuke...he does look good in green...
    though the blue uniform and the hair down did me in. xD
    Can't wait for an update and the lemons...I have a feeling
    when you do write it...it'll be totally worth the wait!
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  • From ichigokun on December 06, 2010
    “Yes, perhaps I should have waited until after I explained it to make your head explode.”

    This line? SO awesomely Hiei.

    I like the way your Hiei is becoming more and more IC the more you write him. And, well, your Yusuke too. Oh, hell, I love everybody.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From Tesgura on December 06, 2010
    Great chapter, but no way am I angry about the lack of lemon at least. From what I've read so far I'm really looking forward to it though. Glad you updated, can't wait for more!
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  • From kitkit on December 03, 2010
    ooh its gettin hot..i can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From ichigokun on November 30, 2010
    I love that Shiori is so accepting of her son's relationship. Also, can't wait until the sexings!
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  • From XianaTsuya on November 29, 2010
    Oh my gosh you were so right that was mean lol!
    But for the record...I love Hiei, I love the way you play all three of them
    and this is getting very interesting. Thanks for the story.
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  • From ANON - Daze Kitshoney on November 29, 2010
    *sniff* such a mean cliffy! lol But Im lovein this story! Keep it up! ^^
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  • From Tesgura on November 29, 2010
    Oooh Yuuske and Heie are going to have the smex! What's Kurama going to think/say about that? What if Shiori walks in on Heie and Yuuske? That would be hilarious! Can't wait to read more.
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  • From Sutioxxx on November 28, 2010
    THIS CHAPTER
    THIS CHAPTER
    THIS CHAPTER
    SJDFOASDJASLDKJ
    THAT HAIR PULLING
    Oh and you used the word "glorious" which we talked about the other day. I smiled.
    NASDOAIFJASODAJSDAOSDIJ
    ANYWAY
    I THINK THERE NEEDS TO BE SOME DEMONSTRATIONS

    FUCK YOU FOR LEAVING IT THERE
    I WANT MORE
    MORE.

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  • From ichigokun on November 24, 2010
    Your Yusuke is as funny and awesome as ever. Though, as of this point, the background characters are making this for me. Especially Keiko and Shiori- I ADORE how you write them.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on November 24, 2010
    You know, for a second there I thought Yusuke was going to flip out at the table with Kurama family. Heh. AND IT'S SEX TIEMS NAO, YES? I'D PICK BOTH OF THEM TOO.

    And: "Yusuke, Hiei and I are more likely to become lovers with each other rather than any other demon." BEST LINE EVAR. I APRROVE.

    (Also, the last paragraph or so is all in italics, I think you have to fix the coding.)
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  • From kitkit on November 24, 2010
    oh happy happy joy joy...hiei and kurama and yusuke are a couple. lets just hope yusuke doesn't do anythin stupid to mess it up.
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  • From Tesgura on November 24, 2010
    Than goodness everything's out in the open now, at least between those three. Where do the boys go from here? Sex I hope!
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