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Reviews for Carbon

By : Mikastarlight
  • From yaoihentai69 on February 02, 2011
    mmm, delicious as always. It's ok Yusuke, you'll get used to it eventually, until then, I'll keep cackling. XD
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  • From BlueUtopiah on February 02, 2011
    OH MAN MIKA I JUST READ SO MUCH OF THIS. IT'S SO FUCKING AMAZING.

    I have no complaints about the porn. And I love the slice-of-life stuff within a greater plot. I'm also glad that you addressed Kurama's problem - the whole explanation of his consciousness and the souls in one body was really nicely written.

    Kuwabara commenting on Yusuke's hickey was alkshlhashal funny. And now back to the porn - it's crazy and hot and they do all kinds of dirty stuff to each other and I love it. There you go.

    And Yusuke now has a mommy that cares about how he likes his tea! *squee*
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  • From ichigokun on January 27, 2011
    As much as I love your Shiori and your sense of characters, the "Hiei also can produce tear gems" and "demon bite marks are love" things are a mite cliche. I hope you can work with them into something original, though.
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  • From kitkit on January 27, 2011
    love it
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  • From Strailo on January 21, 2011
    It is four in the morning. You...I got sucked into this story and I'm about to crash, but damnit! I wanted to read it all! And I did. I want to read more. *grabs blankets and settles in to wait* *pulls out Yusuke, Kurama and Hiei plushies to cuddle*
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  • From kitkit on January 18, 2011
    love it
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  • From Tesgura on January 14, 2011
    Yay! Yuusuke graduated! So long looser teachers! I'm glad everything's working out, but how will Yuusuke and Hiei deal with Kurama's reluctance to admit his homosexuality? I don't see that problem going away any time soon. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From Hemamal on January 07, 2011
    Yeah, I can finally post without an error message showing up.

    First off, in the beginning of the story, I found the chemistry between Yusuke and Kurama very enthralling. Their interactions are almost poetic in the simple actions being so filled with hidden feeling and the budding of a more intimate love.

    When Hiei was added into the mix I was kind of thrown off for a second, even though they are my favorite threesome. I was afraid that Hiei's inclusion would interfere with the romance between Yusuke and Kurama. I am more than happy to find out that I was wrong! You added Hiei in seamlessly, in my opinion. Hiei also added a different dynamic that I wasn't expecting.I am very happy with the addition now.

    All in all, great story so far and I am waiting eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

    PS. I found the fact that Yusuke beat Kurama on a test hilarious!!! i could just imagine Kurama's expression perfectly. ^_^
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  • From kitkit on January 05, 2011
    love it
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  • From yaoihentai69 on January 04, 2011
    Congrats to Yusuke for graduating and getting accepted! XD I wonder if Hiei learned his lesson to not suddenly start something if he's not ready to take what he gets in return. shishishi Yusuke is so lucky to have them~ As always, a pleasure to read. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Q on January 03, 2011
    Typically, I don't review things, because I'm a lazy git. However, I''m making an exception for you: REad it all, loved it all, write more please? I congradulate you for keeping everyone believable, and for keeping my attention.
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  • From Tesgura on January 03, 2011
    Oooh, that's so sweet of Kurama's mom! And I can't believe Yuusuke got a better score than Kurama! That is so awesome! And I'm really surprised Kurama didn't get him a car, but it makes sense to get a computer, as useful as they are for school. Can't wait for more!
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  • From kitkit on December 31, 2010
    wonderful..i luv it
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  • From RugbyGod on December 28, 2010
    This is a great story! It flows incredibly well! Can't wait for more!
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  • From writeaddict on December 27, 2010
    It was a good chapter. The sex scene between them was steaming. I like that I can see Yusuke slowly progressing/changing for the better. I hope to see more soon.
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