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Reviews for Unbalanced Pendulum

By : EmbersEye
  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on November 29, 2004
    Neato! Very kewl idea...I like it alot!!! I find it interesting how you changed the way Kuronue dies...I don't mind, though, 'cause it adds a nice plot twist to the story. I also really enjoyed the way you chose to portray Hiei, as well as the way the fic is from his POV. I can't wait to find out what happens, expecially now that Hiei and Kurama have met up w/ each other! Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - Dark_KittyCat on November 28, 2004
    That was great i love your story so im hoping youll update soon, sorry for not reading it sooner, that was real stupid of me and im hoping you will update soon PLEASE!!! again i really really really thought your story was wonderfull no great no better than great so please update soon
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  • From ANON - yokaze on July 01, 2004
    oops . . . forgot to mention how much i liked the lemon *grin* im not good at writing lemons, and, although this was hiei with KUROUNE, i still liked it. however chopped-like it was. i want u to write another! ur better then i ever could be but no matter.
    MORE, gorannsai-ka
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  • From ANON - yokaze on July 01, 2004
    *speechless after reading four chapters at once* too, much ... too much at one time . . . too much goodness at one time ... ... ... of course im not saying u have no faults but WOW u write good!!! scratch that, make that WELL *mumbling* unlike myself BUT NEVER MIND THAT! I WAANNNTTTT more MUCH, MUCH MORE! Well, i guess im not speechless anymore. ^,^
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  • From ashimoto on June 27, 2004
    I'm in love with this story! ^.^ I'm quite interested in seeing what's going to happen, as I havt bet been let down yet. The Karasu x Hiei scene was grand! ^^
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  • From ANON - Kori on June 27, 2004
    "A pendulum swings back and forth. Telling time as it passes. Tick, tick and then...it stops" Quote from Hikari Nanase. That was the first thing that popped in my head when I read the title of this story. I can't believe I haven't found it long ago! I read full through non-stop and was delighted by it, if I didn't like the first chapter with the heavey lime. That's what I call it. I don't like seeinei iei in bed with Karasu. Sent shivers up my spine! I hope you'll update soon and have more really good chapters!
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