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Reviews for Unbalanced Pendulum

By : EmbersEye
  • From on February 12, 2005
    Please update this soon, because I really enjoy this story...
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  • From ANON - GS* on January 26, 2005
    omg. i luv this fic. its soo goood!!!!! its like a show or a movie! and i luv how u switch points of view a lot hehehehe. soo detailed. ur amazing.!!!!!!! XD hahah. update soo. wanna c/read wut happenes next!
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  • From on January 23, 2005
    Okay, I had just read chapter 1 – 4 but I could tell that this story has an interesting plot. You put them all in action, man! All of them who might have a feeling towards Kurama! Karasu, Hiei, Kuronue… (why don’t you include Yomi?)… this is unique indeed. Kurama was Kuronue’s lover, but Hiei killed the bat and started to develop feeling for his captor but he supposes to hand the fox to his employer who want Kurama as well! Ooooohhh, as Miss Buenagirl might say: the drama, drama, drama! ^o^ (But you killed Kuronue!! *teary eyed*) Oh well, I’ll keep up with this fanfic anyways. After all, it’s hard to find Youko Kurama’s fic that written coherently with just enough details these days (though you could be a little bit wordy at times----*reads his own fanfic and notes his own hideous fondness of unnecessary flowery words*who am I to talk?*hangs his head in shame v.v; *----but that still okay^____^). Will come back later to read more!
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  • From ANON - Flamingolo on January 20, 2005
    Interesting ficcie, I especially like the interaction between Y and OC in the beginning. It did a nice job setting up Y's personality and creating a kind of foreboding. I liked the pendulum reference, too; very fitting with the theme of the fic so far, and also very effectively foreboding since it's clear something chaotic/unexpected is on the rise. I like that you're keeping an air of mystery to it, and I'm completely unsure which direction you'll end up taking the fic. Intriguing piece of work, looking foreward to more.
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  • From ANON - Vile Deadboss on January 20, 2005
    It's been awhile a YYH fic has caught my insterest. I'm eager to see more so please keep up! it's delicious.
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  • From ANON - hColleen on January 19, 2005
    Wow...this has a lot of character development. I like it....I like how you portray Hiei and Kurama. I felt badly over Karasu's death...mostly over how it was orchestrated to be meaningless...I'm not really sure what else to say, thought I do look forward to reading more.
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  • From on January 16, 2005
    That chapter was sweet in a strange, sadistic sort of way... but I still loved it. Great job, and continue to update!
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  • From ANON - Viridian Magpie on January 16, 2005
    oooh, this is good. really good. I like the style. and the fic's very different from all the other hiei/kurama stories out there. original. (darn I sound like I can't form a coherent sentence). anyway, keep going!!
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  • From WindCharmer on January 16, 2005
    OHHH That was eerie. I love how you write with such description. ::shivers:: Update soon =]
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  • From ANON - Yamistar (not logged in) on January 16, 2005
    OMG!! That was so freaky! But it was so cool! Please update again, real soon! I tell ya this story is addictive! Addictive I say! ~Ys
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  • From ANON - What2callmyself on January 16, 2005
    Heya!! Poor Kurama!! Tch, Hiei shouldn't be that disgusted with a sign of fear, after all, didn't he have his own? It seems they are helping each other. What did the First want? What will happen to them? Please update soon!
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  • From WindCharmer on January 11, 2005
    WOW, I really liek thsi fic so far. You have an interesting storyline and good desc. and all. PLease do upate soon=]
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  • From ANON - kurayami-ni-koorime on January 09, 2005
    -Wails- I don’t know why the review things hate me...they never take the full review! TT_TT Once again I love the delicious way you string together your descriptions combining Youko’s infatuated followers and his godliness in the same light. You say that Youko has a cult of chimeras? Since when? I thought he had a little league of thieves but I didn’t know them all to be chimeras; look at Yomi-sama. ._.? But its okay... I’ll attribute that to the AU plot line and the fact that rumors get screwed over a lot when induced by fear on the pedestal of one like Youke Kurama. –bites lips- Karasu giggles? Whats up with that XD When I first read your little something extra scene I thought wow... mindless rutting here but now that I think about it really after setting an insurance price like that it was somewhat called for. ^^; Great scene by the way... hard to believe that it’s your first. (Not that I support that pairing per say but at the risk of sounding like Paris Hilton here; that was hot. X3) And thus the chapter ends; very good over all!
    Fav. Line: there’s no one line, I like the whole lemon scene
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  • From ANON - kurayami-ni-koorime on January 09, 2005
    Interesting beginning... I like the adding of the pendulum thing in the very beginning and how we’re kind of just thrown into the story line within the first paragraph; very nice. Its all unarguably good until the oreste thing... I don’t understand why you’re telling us all about this demon when he’s a mere lackey. ...Unless your trying to insinuate that Karasu is the oreste demon... >< Cool concept but kind of irrelevant. >
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  • From ANON - Kikvws on January 08, 2005
    Ooooh! This is really a wunderful story! I love the pendulum symbolism at the beginning. Please update soon!!!!
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