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Reviews for Unbalanced Pendulum

By : EmbersEye
  • From ANON - Devils Rhyme on September 05, 2005
    ....haha, you read my mind. I had a feeling that the 'crow' had SOMETHING to do with Karasu. And what do you know?!?! Lol, anyway, I love this story...it's very good. And chapter 14 had the most delicious lemon in it. We need another one of those...just...I dunno. Are you gonna make Kurama dominant? *shudders* Not that I'll hate the story if you do...Kurama, even Youko, just doesnt seem dominant to me. I guess Im just crazy.
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  • From ANON - MikaSamu on September 04, 2005
    Wonderful! I am so happy that the pendulum has swung again, yet as you showed toward the end, how much it has swung and the eventual outcome is still unclear (to this reader at least)! I shamed to admit that I did not make the connection between the crows and Karasu until he showed up, which was yet another surprise -- but a delightful one. I hope Kurama and Hiei find their way to safety in the end, and very eagerly await more.
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  • From ANON - hColleen on September 04, 2005
    Yay, that was quick...and good, too. I like how things are uncertain...how neither of them really knows what to do now...where they stand. As I said of the lemon. it fits with the relationship they've developed...the oddness...the strangeness that brought them and bound them together. I look forward to see how things work when Karasu makes his presence known...that will place Hiei in quite a conundrum, I think...
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  • From ANON - Nikkler on September 04, 2005
    Hello, I'm Nikkler and I just started reading it today. I have to say that I'm really sad that there are not anymore chapters. This is a great fanfic. I can't wait to see what happens. Huggles
    Nikkler
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  • From ANON - CrimsonFox on September 04, 2005
    That was an incredibly sweet scene with Kurama daydreaming of telling an innocent Hiei the children's story, and I want to see them grow even closer together as Karasu closes in on them. Please update soon.
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  • From mhmartini on August 29, 2005
    I feel sorry for those who were "spared" on good, ol' ff.net. They missed out. I really liked this chapter, it was very intense. Their desperation is almost intoxicating, and I can't help but wonder where this will end. Hiei is, after all, under contract. And Youko, he's pretty much stuck. But stuck with Hiei. As scary and terrifying and alone and downright not good as that is, it's still makes for a good story.

    I look forward to your next update!!
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  • From ANON - Kodaijin Hiei on August 29, 2005
    Still you amze me with your writing.. it has gotten better not that it wasnt better to begin with heh. This chapter was awsome please continue -gives her a whole bunch of cookies/brownies-
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  • From ANON - CrimsonFox on August 29, 2005
    That was really awesome... in a rather frightening way... but I love it anyway. Please update soon. I'm very curious as to how the two actually feel about one another, because Kurama doesn't seem to see hiei as nothing more than his atonement and Hiei sees Kurama as something to be owned. Is he still giving Kurama to Karasu? Sorry, I might have missed that answer.
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  • From ANON - hColleen on August 28, 2005
    What an...odd chapter...but, then, it fits the story. My only complaint (geesh, I'm whiny) is that it was so long since the last chapter I had to go back and read it over again. I like it...I look forward to what you do with them next. Please don't keep us waiting so long...pretty please.
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  • From ANON - Naisakeme on August 12, 2005
    KWAII!!!!!!!!! that was soo cute, but at the same time, STUPID FOOLISH HIEI. I get the feeling that Karasu will be back, damn him!! Update, PLEASE!!
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  • From Evey on July 14, 2005
    I LOVE this story! It's so good, but it must take a long time to type, unless you're a really fast typist. Well, I have to say this is my favorite story. So update as often as you can. (I know you probably already are)
    Thanks,
    Eve
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  • From ANON - Kodaijin Hiei(not logged in) on July 11, 2005
    heey yey you updated, but please do so again. I like this chapter muchos but so did a bunch i am betting.
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  • From ANON - kitsunechibiko on July 11, 2005
    it was great. hurry up and write!
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  • From ANON - kitsunechibiko on July 11, 2005
    that was a nice one. it took me 3 days to read but it was awesome. i loved it and your interpritations of everything and how they reacted to each other. i sound like a teacher praising a performance. hee hee. see-ya, i enjoyed it. hurry up and right!
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  • From ANON - Everqueen on July 10, 2005
    Different then anything I've read on Hiei and Kurama, i like it so far.
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