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Reviews for The Depth of Demon Bonds

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  • From ANON - Skwishee on March 07, 2005
    that was awesome. Look forward to reading more!
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  • From ANON - Yamistar on March 07, 2005
    God! I read this at aschool, and I almost got caught. But it was worth it!!!! Update soon! U kept your promise last time!!! Please don't fail me!!! I have computer again Friday!! *raises eye brows suggestivly* Eh? Eh? ~Ys
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  • From EmbersEye on March 05, 2005
    Alright, I'm back here finally lol and here are my notes on chapters 3 through 8 - bleh a lot of ground to cover I know.

    First off, absolutely every little problem was made up for by Hiei and Kurama's first kiss. I loved that scene.

    Your action scenes were much better in chapter 3 but again in later chapters it seemed as if you hadn't read the scene through to make sure that your actions actually flowed from one to the other.

    The characters were really written to their cliches. My responses to some of the over-the-top moments: Kurama doesn't explode at people without great provocation. He's way too poised for that. I don't think that Hiei would reject a jacket because store owner agreed with its good appearance, nor do I believe that Hiei is stupid enough to continually be suspicious of every food stuff (see the coffee scene when the tantei first check into the hotel for the dark tournament). I also can't believe that Hiei would buy a jacket only if Kurama bought it first, if anything, Kurama having the same jacket might be incentive for Hiei NOT to but the jacket. I just cannot picture them walking around in matching jackets.

    Proofreading!!

    Kurama doesn't have any demon blood in his human body.

    Chapter seven seemed more like the summary of a whole bunch of chapters rather than an actual chapter. The plot didn't actually develop, the author just said that it happened.

    The song was fit wonderfully into chapter 8. The way you broke it up with the dialogue (or perhaps vice versa) was very appropriate and well done.
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  • From ANON - Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In) on March 05, 2005
    Um yeah ::DROOLINGGGG:: That was hot... awesome... loving... sensual... mmmm absolutely DELICIOUS! Thank you for updating so quickly you ROCK!
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  • From ANON - Koorime1905 on March 05, 2005
    VERY GOOD,you write a lemon,that make me so happy.Your lemon is very passionate,you know.I LOVE YOU,see you in the next chap
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  • From ANON - youkaiblood on March 04, 2005
    yay! i long and wonderful awaited lemon has arrived! when you first mentioned that there was gonna be a lemon i must have starred blankly at the screen thinking who would be uke and who would be seme
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  • From ANON - Heidi on March 04, 2005
    That was wonderful. I am so glad that you worked out like you did. I love the story and the lemon was perfect.
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  • From ANON - Koorime1905 on March 04, 2005
    hey,sorry becuse of this late but my computer have some kind of problems so again GOMEN.Um,you make me wait for so long for a passionate lemon,however, your story is so good that I can't angry with you anymore.You said in your fic that Kurama didn't have any hair in his body,except the hair in his head,this is quite right but how about his crotch(i don't know how to spell this word),you should write more careful next time.Anyway,keep going,I LOVE this fic.JA!
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  • From ANON - Heidi on March 01, 2005
    Hey, missed sending a review for the last few chaps. but to tell you the truth I got concerned with where the story was going. But within a few chapters I was quickly reminded of why I love your writing stlye so much. I love the turn you took on why Hiei thought that they could not be together and reading it, it made perfect sense. (I think that i have read too many fics where Hiei was seme and just assumed) but looking at Kurama's personality, That would certainly be a problem. This is the first fic I have read where the author took so much interest in keeping the char. in char. so to speak. Anyway, just a note to let you know that I am loving the story and where you are taking it. One quick question though, Are you still updating it on Mediaminer? I can only see to chap. 3 there. I read it on AFF just fine so it does not really matter just wondering.
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  • From ANON - tinyteeth on March 01, 2005
    *paces back and forth thinking, Ok if I kill her then no new chapers. However she she die for ending the last onelike that.*
    fine you shall live *pouts* but fear the wrath of all cliffhanger haters. Still an very good chapter *hand you half a cake* sorry I got hungry.
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  • From ANON - Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In) on March 01, 2005
    YAYYYYYY!!!!! I loveeee this fic!!! This was an awesome chapter, so full of emotion, and longing, and pain, desperation! I LOVE IT! You are such a wonderful writer. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - youkaiblood on March 01, 2005
    new chapter by the weekend! so unfair! -stomps foot like little kid-

    at the beginning of the chapter i was like YES!!! they are going to get together! but then hiei sadly turned kurama down
    -throws empty box of tissues away- and now they might get together! w00t!!!

    even though this chapter was depressing(well for my part) i can never deny that you do an awsome job.(this story has become one of my weaknesses!o_0)

    well please update soon!
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  • From ANON - youkaiblood on February 28, 2005
    OMFG!!! that was awsome! i cant believe how well this story is going! i especially loved the part when hiei was on the bed naked and kurama had to put a towl over hiei!!! ^-^ that made me laugh for a very long time!!! to bad kurama has to go back to work the next day! they could be having lots of fun!!! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - tinyteeth on February 28, 2005
    Thankyou. *walks out* *runs back* Thank you, thank you, thank you *hands you a bunch of flowers some candy and plushies* Weeeee, they kissed.
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