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Reviews for Love's Denial

By : Drumanel
  • From theklvkid2 on March 24, 2010
    You are a wonderful writer. Never think otherwise. I find your story extremely enjoyable, and you should be proud of yourself. I also seem to link quite well with the characters, which caused me to stop reading in the middle of chapters... for... reasons... um, anyway, that's a complement. So Thank you!

    klv
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  • From ANON - abcde on June 29, 2009
    PLease please please please please please please please please please update! i love your story so much and i really want to know what's going to happen next!
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  • From ANON - Shadow Kytten on December 20, 2008
    Ok, I know that critique isn't always nice, hopefully mine is nice enough. I love your OC's, Kurama makes for a surprisingly awesome bastard, and Yusuke really is that dumb 'on purpose' in the manga. But, and I do not know any other way to put this....BDSM is Not for the faint at heart. You did a good job portraying it, for a virgin...that shows you did some 'homework' on it. However, some 'Masters' do not force as...openly...as that. Mind games are often involved, tricks and schemes so to speak. I knew someone who was a 'slave' in such a relationship, and she told me, 'Master does not force me outright to do things, but that's because I'm his favorite pet, and so he often hints around...then lets me decide.' That's trickery in my book, and wouldn't you agree? I would also like to comment about your habit of calling readers and reviewers 'kittens'...Nice Touch, Hun. That's actually rather charming and not something 'Masters' often do. However, you are not my 'Master' for I listen only to myself, and I am my only boss. That's right, I'm Dominant, an Alpha Female, and I have my own pack. I may be reading/reviewing your story, but that does not give you any Real hold over me. But you may call me 'Shadow Kytten', if you wish. I will not say, 'please' I choose to instead say, 'Keep on Keeping on.'
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  • From 66Hiei08 on December 15, 2008
    Chapter 18 needs fixed at the bottom. :o)
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  • From ANON - Lifesnofairytale on December 10, 2008
    Yay! I loved your new chapters as everything really starts to come together. Can't wait to see how those few last loose ends pull together!
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  • From ANON - Lifesnofairytale on October 20, 2008
    Yay! you updated! I love this story please keep up the good work (especially with your foreshadowing ~_^
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  • From shippom5 on October 18, 2008
    Oh my god now it's sadistic and hot you're killing me here(But in a good way might i add :)

    I'm not sure if it's sweet anymore, maybe just spicy and sadistic

    We shall find out?!

    i cannot wait till the next one, keep on trucking
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  • From PhoenixKit on October 15, 2008
    Oh come on now girl! I finally got the time/internet to finish reading this and you haven't updated for a little while.... Talk about the ultimate cliffhanger..
    Obviously, I like. Took a little while for me to try and get used to your "version" of Kurama, but I'm okay with him now. :P
    I must say, I'm curious as to where this is headed, for sure.
    And aside from a few small errors here and there, you caught me. Hook line and sinker. VERY nice work hun.

    -Thi Luna
    aka. The Moon Child (for now at least)
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  • From shippom5 on September 29, 2008
    this is like my favorite story ever it's like sweet and spicy kinda hope to see an update soon... peace-->
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  • From SkyaraSnow on March 03, 2008
    It's a pretty good idea, and I think I have some of it figured out already. >< Bad me. There's just a few tiny things that I found wrong. Mostly grammar and spelling issues, and a tendecy to bounce between past tense and present tense. Other than that, I liked it. Hope to see more soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Blood_Illusions on March 02, 2008
    Hey!! I still love your story and I'm sorry for not reviewing in forever...I just got busy doing other stuff...
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  • From PhoenixKit on January 21, 2008
    A few small things here and there, but for the most part I like it!
    Can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - Lifesnofairytale on January 19, 2008
    You're story is so well developed, with fantastic twists. I wait impatiently for your next update and the start of the tournament
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  • From ANON - anit on January 13, 2008
    YAY! This is my favorite chapter so far and I'm so flattered I was of help. I actually do the same thing with sex scenes; I get kinda swept up in them and stop thinking straight and wind up getting a bit tangled. Great stuff this chapter; really was!
    I'm snowy white! Actually my kitten is white (she has a black tabby ear and tail mind you but it's still an adorable coincidence)! Great stuff, made my day!
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  • From ANON - anit on January 08, 2008
    It always happens all at once; your tablet dies, you get artist's block, your work comes out all disproporionate, photoshop malfunctions and then the internet goes.
    Such is life, but I can't wait for the next chap!
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