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By : azalea

From BlueUtopiah on June 21, 2009
I don't know what to say. *tears up* You dedicated that awesome fucking Yusuke/Chu fight to me? Rilly? Rilly rilly? *tackles you with glomps* That scene, and the scene before it, was the shit. I know I've said this before, but this story so reads like I'm watching the show - you have the fighting and the atmosphere down perfectly, the balance of silliness and ass-kicking. They should have consulted you when writing the Makai Tournament and maybe the plot for the show would have been 10X better.

And that Yusuke/Hiei scene was hot hot hot. HAHAHAHA I knew Kurama knew and left them alone together. That wanton, mewling, blushing Hiei is a total turn-on. I don't blame Yusuke for hitting that and hitting it hard.

The last scene was so sweet. Where Yusuke "fucking needed" both of them and Hiei got a bit jealous and assertive. AND DOUBLE PEN WITH PLANTS? I'M IN. WHERE CAN I BUY TICKETS TO THAT?!? *sends you nekkid bois for inspiration*
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From yaoihentai69 on June 19, 2009
-cackles madly- Yes! Hiei in heat! I think Yusuke did a pretty good job dealing with that. XD Twas absolutely yummy. And of course, I can't pass up that kick ass fight. Gods, I loved it! I honestly felt like I was watching it instead of reading. ^o^ I just love your details. They are that damn awesome. I really must stay tuned for the epilogue. How could I not?!

Also, SLINKY!!!!!!!!!!! LMAO! Lord, I was laughing so damn hard at that. Even shared it with my mother, who proceeded to laugh her butt off as well. Oh, the joys of having a perverted family. heheh

I love your writing and look forward to whatever else you crank out. ^^
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From AmyMcClair on June 19, 2009
As I have been giving you a short review with the edits, I haven't been leaving them here, but I have to say the citrus in this chapter outdid all the rest. I had to read it again. That and you said there was more than what I saw. I likey.
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From NAnderson on June 18, 2009
I knew because I am mentally linked to you >:) didnt you know that lol? Oh I can see all kinds of fun happening in the next chapter :D but really... its the last chapter :( ????? why must you do that to me Q.Q sigh... so sad. But why on earth was yusuke 1) out of it for so long? and 2) ignoring hiei??!!! the nerve of him lol. Oh and fyi I have no defense to the york patties lol. And on a side note are you planning on writing another fanfic for yu yu hakusho when this one is done??? please say yes lol!!! Well since asking nice got a better response I guess I will go with that again. Pretty please update soon with extra lemons on top ^.^ because I REALLYYYY want to read threesome with double pentration.. drool .... oh the yummyness....
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From spooksies on June 18, 2009
i am sad this is ending but happy that you UPDATED!!!

n-e-ways, had a nose bleed session when i re-read this!! Hiei in heat!!! *shivers running up and down spine* BOO-FUCKING-YA!!!

*ahem* sorry. that sliped.

as for the fights, WOW, just WOW! the fight parts i have probs with and can never get them the way i want them. but yours are so....WOW!!

i wonder if you have any other ideas in store for a sequel???? just asking!

laters! and MAJOR LOVES!!!!

miko ~_^

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From Kerrisa on June 17, 2009
LMAO!!! I can't believe I did that xD It was bound to happen though =P I have no idea how many fics I'm reading at the moment, but I know there have to be at least 15, most in the Naruto genre of yaoi yummyness but only two in the Yu Yu genre... I need to find more Yu Yu fi-- maybe not... I need to finish the fics I've started... (lol i can only do so much with that cuz a lot of those fics are WIPs) or my list will be never ending @_@ Lol but on to a proper review for the fic...

Ahem..

You completely delivered that last lemon!!! O-M-G it was up to expectations, it was Hott, I AM going to read it again after I send this review for the sake of the lovely dreams a wanton Hiei will inspire. Oh my.. Hiei in this chapter... it would be so nice to animate some of the scenes in the fanfics I read (..or the entire fic)he was absolutely delicious and that scene needs to be animated. The hottness of it all... just... palpable...

Ok, need a new train of thought. The fight scenes were awesome!!!! Those are like the hardest things to write! Or at least I think they would be... personally I don't think I've actually ever attempted to write a full out fight scene, but yours are awesome! So they can be done!

You're awesome, I adore, I jumped for joy (and my eyes bugged) when I realized this fic had been updated, and i am looking forward to the epilogue!!! Threesomes are sexy, especially when they star three of your favorite demons. The fic, thus far, has ended well and after the epi I hope you are going to present us with a new fic just as exciting and dynamic and full of yummy smexiness as this fic was!

XOXOXs~!
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From DuosAngel on June 17, 2009
Like anyone wouldn't want to come back for the epilogue. Double penatration AND plants? I'm gonna have to go back to stalking your LJ.

This chapter was great! Loved the tournament. The fight between Yusuke and Chu was awesome!
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From ANON - Coyotillo on June 16, 2009
Chu beating on Yusuke? I don't by that.

Nope. Nope. Did you even see the end of the series?

Bullshit.

I like everything else though. :)
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From silverysora on June 16, 2009
Wow. That was amazing.
You've got the Yu Yu Hakusho gang nailed. Go you!
The fight scene was an appropriete second fight for Yusuke and Chu, while the subtle hints of Jin/Touya and Shishi/Suzaku had me squeeling with glee on the inside. And of course gotta appreciate our favorite demon threesome. :P
I very much look forward to the epilogue to this fantastic story and many more to come (hopefully).
All in all, You ROCK!

:D
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From ANON - Kitsune on June 15, 2009
Once again, you have given me something to look forward to for awhile. I'm glad you finally updated. I've been looking at your LiveJournal, thinking, "When?!? I need the next chapter!" YOu are amazing in this chapter. A lot of people have problems with fight scenes, or if they're good, can't write much of anything else well. You are able to mesh everything together so well though! Hiei and Yusuke at the beginning of the chapter made me happy, as well as Chu and his drunken slurred speech. The possibilities for next chapter have me very excited. Continue with the good work!
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From ANON - Crim on June 07, 2009
I don't like to get fangirly, really I don't, but that last chapter was fangirl worthy. Squeeeeee! Ok now that I've got that out of my system. The detail you put into the dojo was wonderful. It shows that you actually think about your story and put intellect in it, things that seem to be lacking nowadays. I loved the Yusuke/Jin fight with every fiber of my being, Jin came out just perfectly and the ending was touching. But out of the entire thing my favorite part had to be Hiei returning. DAMN that was hot! I can't wait to read the rest of Hiei's return home.
But it does make questions run through my head and I must ask one to help settle my curiosity. Do you believe in the whole 'Male demons can have children' thing that fanfiction writers like to use?
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From ANON - EDA on June 03, 2009
I love this story! I've kept up with ever sence i found it. i can not wait for the next chapter.
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From Kerrisa on May 19, 2009
The grapefruit huh? You are so freaking adorable. *Waves a double fudge caramel brownie in front of the dryer door* It's ok, you can come out now =)

I don't know when I last reveiwed this fic, or if I ever had (gomen nasai..) but you should know that i believe you are a complete and utter genius that should be spoiled and pampered and fed grapes one a time while lounging on a bed comprised completely of soft fluffy pillows.

Is it necessary for me to tell you how much I love this fic and your entire person after that last sentence?

No? Sweetness.

Yes, you are amazing and I am and looking forward to Naruto ravaging Hiei thoroughly. It's been too long since Hiei played uke to Yusuke's seme. Haha, my mind is all over the place (that, and House is on) so your next chapter, I shall leave you a review that fully disects the awesomeness of the chapter being reviewed. Remember, you're amazing. =)
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From ANON - Marikalay on May 17, 2009
You know, now that I've read chapters seven and eight, they do feel a little bit like they were just for me. And what chapters they were! They held me absolutely in thrall, gazing at the computer with a slight look of breathless anticipation on my face... and blushing like a virgin.

Your writing is exquisite and steady, and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
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From kanezu on May 12, 2009
*HUG* Thank you. Thank you. It was great! I love Yusuke and Jin getting together and even if it did end in a cliffy it is one that has my imagination running like crazy. I always look forward to your new chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Thank you for updating.
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