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Reviews for Growth of a Spirit Detective

By : azalea
  • From ANON - kit-kit on January 07, 2008
    love it
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  • From yaoihentai69 on January 06, 2008
    Kyaaa!!!! I've been waiting for this chapter for so long. XD -hugs and kisses- The wait was worth it tho! -more hugs and kisses- -takes deep breath to calm down- I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait to see just how bloody(er) that room will be after Hiei is done. ^o^ And for some reason, I can't help but like your torture methods. >.>;; hmm....anyways, keep up the great work! -hands you the bag with the rest of the hugs and kisses- :P
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  • From DuosAngel on January 06, 2008
    You better have the next chapter up soon! How could you leave things like this?! Poor Kurama, I hope Hiei slices off Hakane's body parts one by one and then guts him! (Unless you can think of something better?)
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  • From BlueUtopiah on January 06, 2008
    You know what I like about you? You can do gore, and I like gore. Come on, these guys are demons, and you deliver on their demonic nature. Aside from that, I was gonna give you crap for there not being a lemon in this :D but then you put in Kurama torture and possible rape, which is always thumbs up in my book. And of couse, you have Hiei being badass, which is another thumbs up.

    I loved Yusuke's reaction to the gore (he's still reeling from the dreams) and how you portrayed Kurama's incoherence. It's tough to do that right without making him OOC and you did it Just Right. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Katonie on January 05, 2008
    okay, that PISSES ME OFF!!! That bitch Kaname better be killed off quick! And Hakane or whatever his name is! Argh! I feel So sorry for Kurama. Please let them be okay.
    Otherwise, I absolutly LOVE this story, please continue and update again soon.

    Hugs & kisses

    Katonie
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  • From ladyicondraco on October 30, 2007
    This story is great, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Hemamal on September 21, 2007
    This has to be my favorite chapter, it;s just awesome!!! I have to agree with Kuwabara about his brain imploding because mine certainly did! And what's up with Hiei being a peeping tom, he sure got an eye full!!!! Great work!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hemamal on September 21, 2007
    I am really loving this story!! I has both my favorite pairings in it. HxK and KxY Rocks!!!!!
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  • From ichigokun on September 01, 2007
    DAMN, thE plant porn was so fucking HOT! Kudos!
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  • From ANON - Birdy666 on August 23, 2007
    Love the story line so far can not wait for more story. But don't rush it if the muse will not come out to play give it time and if it dose whahoo more story. I like the way your story plays out smoothly and you don't rush the story just to get to the sex scenes which are very hot as well. I like the play between Hiei/Yusuke and Kurama. I've found I like the three way love triangles the best in stories, and this one is another good one in a sea of two-somes that are out there. The only one that matches this is one I stumbled onto several weeks ago called Demon Desires by ShioriFoxiesMom yours is shaping up to being better so take the time on the plot don't rush the story it will be better for it. I like the way you're pretty much keeping Hiei/Yusuke/Kurama in character but still putting a little more depth to them that is believable as well a entertaining. I can just see in my minds eye the exspression,looks and feelings that your words create in the stories situations. I can not wait to see what you come up with for what happens on the mission and Yusuke reaction or nonreaction the marking that both Hiei and Kurama put on him without meaning to before he gave his consent and what it mean. I also like how Yusuke is clueless about his demon heritage. So to make a long update shorter I'll say the over all story is GREAT keep up the good work hope to see an update in the near or almost near future.
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  • From bloodstone on August 22, 2007
    I really like this story. I hope you update soon. Please? ^___^
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  • From Nekoastrid on August 21, 2007
    whoa must update! (yaoi senses going crazy!) I haven't read a yu yu three way this good since... well I can't actully remember the name of the fic but it was good too. I love it when those three realize that life and sex is so much better then they are together to share ^^ . please update soon, I really want to know whats going on with this mission and hope that yusuke realizes that hiei and kurama want him for more then just his heat (lol)....so much...yaoi..goodness!

    Ja!
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  • From kitkit on August 20, 2007
    me love..i can't wait to see what happens when yusuke goes on the mission in his heat..i can just see a demon getting taken over by yusuke scent and trying to rape yusuke
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  • From BlueUtopiah on August 13, 2007
    Shall we discuss all the hotness in this chapter? GRAB YOUR FANS.

    -Hiei just pwning Yusuke and sliding under him to pleasure him.
    -Yusuke in Hiei's lap, kissing him senseless.
    -Kurama stumbling in the stairwell because of the scent Yusuke's giving off. Wow, it has to be some powerful stuff for someone as graceful as Kurama to almost fall down.
    -Kurama...with the plant, and Hiei whispering in his ear giving instructions. That's when I almost popped a gasket.
    -Kurama telling Yusuke to fuck him.
    -Just...the whole threesome. Gyah. I love that Hiei tops, that's made of awesome.
    -Yusuke saying When I wake up in the morning, I’m going to find my hand covered in my own cum… I like that he has no memories of and no control over what's happening to him. Poor thing.
    -Hie and Kurama losing control and marking Yusuke.

    You really deliver on the lemons. They're delicious and different and something I want to read over and over. *applause* I'm looking forward to more from you!

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  • From NAnderson on August 11, 2007
    wow.... just...wow.... Can u be in love with a story???? If so I think I just hit that point. LOL> this story is so well planned and written.I love the mini angst fest going on in the mind right now. Its oh so perfect. And ur chapters r just the right lenght. I think u may be one of the best people on this website. Theres not even any OOCness. PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! I want to read more of the story so much!
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