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By : ryukotsusei

From kogaluver on July 26, 2007
Gahhhhh, Kurama is such a bastard! My poor Yusuke. Kurama has certainly lost his mind. His arrogance would almost be funny if it wasn't pushing his darkest side to the forefront, allowing his egotistical entitlement issues to take on a whole new level. He really believes his own bullshit. How vain he is. But then Kurama always did have that personality, he was just able to hide it from everyone. He is a master manipulator after all.

This has just gotten so dark, but everytime I read it I get sucked into the web you've weaved around the characters. You've brought Kurama's dark side out in such a believable way, not to mention how and why Yusuke would put up with such extreme measures to get Hiei. Every aspect of this story has been expertly plotted and flows through the sequence of events effortlessly. That is so hard to do when weaving a story of this nature. Now that the fic has taken an even darker turn, I can't wait to see where it all ends up, even though I already know, lol. It's just so much fun reading it again when posted. It's almost like reading it for the first time.

As always my hats off to my fav writer. I love you so much my little uke.

Your Loving Mistress
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From Foxfairy on July 25, 2007
I finally got finished reading this thing. I've noticed that there is only a few authors actually give decent amount of detail. Most like to just slap some dialogue down and pretend they are doing something. I can see you are going to make this thing take a dramatic turn. But you did give the appropriate tagged warnings so I can't bitch. I actually take my hat off to you. Most people are afraid to take things to a darker side, if they do then they have it unrealistic. Kurama does have a darker side that is hidden and you have done wonders to bring it out. I doubt I'll review again, I usually don't unless I have something important I think needs to be said. Also your knowledge of Yaoi is much appreciated. Hate opening up a fic that has them fucking like a male and a female. My only complaint is how easy Yusuke accepts things but you tried to explain why so I'll live with that. I look forward to see how you shall end this one.
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From kogaluver on July 21, 2007
OMG This is just better and better each time I read it. I so fucking hate Kurama in this, he's such a bastard. He is giving obssessive/possessive a new definition, lol. It's so deliciously evil. My poor Yusuke once again is too trusting by giving Kurama more time to plan. I'm soooooo scawwwwrd. Kurama is giving me the willies.

The threesome was hot. I always new Koenma was a perv, lol and even though Kurama is blackmailing him, Koenma wouldn't be in this mess if he wasn't a perv in the first place. I'm so nervous to read the next chapter. It's gonna be harsh on my boi. I can't wait!

Talk to you tonight

Your Loving Mistress
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From ANON - kerryann on July 21, 2007
Wow,whatb a chapter.But not a surprise that Youko went to far with Yusuke.What now though snd will Yusuke see anyone he knows on the walk?Wonder what Hiei would do if he found out about whats going on with them(would he even care)I can't wait for the next chapter,I love every minute of this and can't wait to see what happens next
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From ANON - KyoHana on July 20, 2007
I love this story, I truly do -- even if Kurama is being a Class A One Bastard, due in large part to his Youko nature. And I have to admit, I really honestly hate him and his treatment of not only Yusuke but the others, mainly because I think he's totally neglecting his humanity as 'Kurama' in favor of the selfish, self-centered Youko. I wonder, too, if he even realizes this and to what end it will all lead.
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From LadyShinomori on July 20, 2007
Oh, I hate your Kurama and I thought I made mine a bastard, yours takes the cake dear. I don't think he should die, should be chained up and forced to watch Hiei fucking Yusuke over and over and over again! And if he touchs one strand on Yusuke's head I'll have Aoshi hunt him down and skin him alive, then plaster honey on his open sections, douse him with ants, cut his pecker off, feed it to Elder Tuguro. After he's a pussed up yellow balloon from all the swollen ant bites. I'm going to take Hiei's sword and pop him. POP! Like an annoying zit. And he should have slapped Keiko, only part I was disappointed with. Sorry, why I don't see her and Yusuke as a couple. She acts like his mother, abusing him at that. I want her to get her another man and first time she decks him I hope he turns around and bitch slaps her harping ass to da FLOOR! *snaps fingers* Now, where was I? Oh yeah, this is looking great. Love it, keep up the good work. Now time for me to go pick up my own bitch from work. Got to get there on time or she's grouchy. Not like she works hard but she does look sexy in that uniform. Much love!
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From BlueUtopiah on July 20, 2007
And right now is where it begins to get ugly. I know you said character death in this, but I'm wondering who is going to die. Kurama? because he finally goes too far, Hiei? because Kurama can't control his jealously, or Yusuke? for the same reasons - possession. I can't tell you how fucking happy I was to see that you posted another chapter of this. This, by far, is my favourite story from you. And you're really taking it to new levels with every single chapter.

The scene with Botan was disturbing. As was the scene with Koenma. And when Yusuke said his safe word and Youko basically dismissed it, my heart was in my chest. EMOD just came out to ask me how the chapter was (because I screamed like a freakjob and then told him to find something to do when I saw you posted it), and I just kind of blinked at him and said - it was great, but very scary. I can't wait to see more.

LOVE AND KINK FOR YOU.
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From ShibuNoNeko on July 17, 2007
Oh my, I think my brain just smelted that is so fucking HOT! I've always prefered Kurama when he's dominant and sadistic and you have managed both excellent and it's always a pleasure seeing that cocky, loud mouthed detective where he belongs, as somebodys bitch. Is it just me or is Hiei slowly dissapering from Yusukes mind and is Kurama getting a bit too possessive of his 'toy'? Anyway, this is definitely one of my favourites, when I started reading it this morning I was so engrossed that I was late for work, try explaning that>.
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From ANON - kerryann on July 14, 2007
This is very well written so far and I look forward to the next chapter very much.Its a new lite to see Yusuke in.Its seems to that he may end up staying with Kurama being he slave or not.Yusuke is starting to have feelings for his fox master.I hope you update soon
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From ANON - kerryann on July 14, 2007
This is so cool.I know I should've reviewed each chapter but I just had to find out what was going to happen,and all I can say is wow it leaves me hot and wanting more.Though through all this I wonder how Yusuke will be able to leave Kurama/Youko it seems they are forming a link between them that niether one may be able to ignore.It may have started out for Hiei but seems to be staying with Kurama(not that thats a bad thing)they make a great master/slave couple.You write very well and I look forward to the next chapters.
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From Pyrokage on July 13, 2007
Please send me an email when you update this story. I look forward to seeing if Yusuke gets Hiei.
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From ichigokun on July 10, 2007
That was SO DAMNED HOT and IC. There were a few purple prose problems, but nothing major. Good job!
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From ANON - Kyohana on July 10, 2007
Yusuke has a pain fetish and Youko's come to play.... I don't think it gets ANY better than this!

Though I have to say, I do like that you still have Kurama's human aspect somewhat understanding of what's happening with Yusuke because I really do like seeing Kurama that way... always have and always will... it's what makes him that much more real to me!
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From AmyMcClair on July 10, 2007
Oh my GOD! I so should have read this sooner. I was unable to sleep last night because I started it then and finished with chap 3 today. I can't wait to see what happens next. The way you write Kurama is exactly how I see him, by the way. Don't change a thing about his persona. Thank you, thank you, thank you! for writing this.
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From kogaluver on July 10, 2007

"But that's only part of it. What else have you done to warrant this sort of attention from me? Omitting transgressions will not lessen your punishment.� Fuck! that is so Kurama to the letter. You know, you keep telling me how hard it is to write Kurama, but you keep him in character more than anyone! So cut yourself some slack, K ^_^

I love how you go from Kurama being tender with Yusuke after the bathroom talk to the evening where he gets his dick pierced, lol. Poor Yusuke is kept guessing all the time. It was so great bringing Youko out to play, especially in front of Fudo, hahahahaha. I guess Youko has to show them all just who Yusuke belongs to. And how Yusuke loves the pain. I always thought Yusuke had to be a masochist with all the punches and abuse his body takes during a fight, only to go back for more. That was a very astute obversation on your part, as well as Youko's, LOL

Loving this story so much!

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