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Reviews for Journey Into Submission

By : ryukotsusei
  • From ANON - The laughing corpse on July 09, 2007
    Beautifully written. Kudos, kudos and tons of nekkid plushies to compliment you.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 09, 2007
    buh?...I'm...uh...wow...yeah....hold on, I gotta bang my head against the wall a few times....

    OK NOW I'M SLIGHTLY COHERENT. Fuck toy is the best phrase ever, that's EMOD's pet name for me, it's such a sweet endearment. And I see that Kurama is becoming extremely possessive of his new toy, and Hiei is drifting further and further away in Yusuke's mind. I can see this getting confusing and ugly the more that develops and I like it.

    But the fingers across the lips killed me dead. So did the fact that Yusuke eats from the floor. You're really hitting the small details well and that's making the story that much more realistic and vivid. I'm loving this so hard. And the piercing scene WHAT CAN I SAY ABOUT THAT THAT ISN'T AJGDKGASDLAHSLDLAHDHLADLAKDKA?!?!? The cock worship....THE COCK WORSHIP. That's one for the record books. Really, I love you more than ever right now. KEEP WRITING THIS. DO IT. NOW. *flails*
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  • From LadyShinomori on July 09, 2007
    Kick ass dream! and can we say OUCH! that had to hurt. cocks, piercings, sex, blood, OH MY! That was the best chapter by far and I see Kurama getting attached to his pet, though I can't blame him. I see Hiei having to fight for him if it comes to that but I can't wait to see it. I'd like to see some double penetration already and some big butt plugs! keep up the good work! Love Ya!
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  • From ANON - Nova on July 07, 2007
    I love this mind body and soul! I hope your muses are well fed and do their job as quickly as possible and wonderfully as ever. All my love to Yoko Kurama.
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  • From ANON - KyoHana on July 06, 2007
    Holy F%**%*%K!! Kurama has this whole BDSM thing down to practically a science (and you write it so freakin' HAWT)! And though I know it would be so easy to sympathize with Yusuke, I can't say that I do (or that I consider the fox a bastard for what he's doing) because, after all, Yusuke did ask for, and agree to, Kurama's help with his 'training'!


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  • From kogaluver on July 06, 2007
    Fuck, why do fics come off even hotter when posted? I'm drooling all over again. Yusuke is such a naughty boy. How I would love to have him strung up for my own pleasure, lol. That was really fucking cruel of Kurama to leave Yusuke hanging again like that, lol. But he was so bad out in public and deserved every stroke of the flogger. I was so dying visualizing Yusuke spread out, sweating, panting, head hanging down in defeat. Oh fuck, I need another cold shower. You're killing me here. I wonder what you sick little whore mind will come up with next. ^_~
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 06, 2007
    Would you like that my little cum slut? To feel both of our cocks forced up into your ass at the same time, driving against each other as we took our pleasure from your pain?

    And that's where I blew a gasket and almost passed out. *bows before you* You have no choice - you need to continue this. I LOVED IT. LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT....but you scare me. That's a good thing. And please tell me why I read this first thing in the morning? because I won't be able to shake this out of my head for the entire weekend.

    And Yusuke being defiant made me laugh out loud and then shudder every time. I'm thinking: oh man, he's gonna GET IT when he gets home! Good job, Yusuke. Kurama's exactly the kind of Master you want to talk back to...in public...in front of his friends at the store.

    The con is going to be so much fun...
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on July 05, 2007
    I think I'm afraid of your sexual sadist Kurama. Really, he scares me. I'm pretty sure Yusuke is wondering what he's gotten himself into. If not now, then eventually he will be. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - steph8503 on July 04, 2007
    OH MY GOD!!! that wasso hot i wish more people did more master slave fics with yusuke and kurama doesn't matter whos master both are hot enough to do it and do it well. please update soon i can't wait tosee what hapens at the salon and afterwards. Great work.
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  • From LadyShinomori on July 04, 2007
    Yes, I liked it! Yusuke makes an awesome pet. Kurama better be careful or he might not want to give up his pet when the year is up. I'm just glad you didn't make the safe word PUU! Keep up the wonderful work as always. The next chapter I want some double penetration.
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  • From WindCharmer on July 04, 2007
    I haven't read a YYH fic in a long time and I'm glad I read this one. ♥!

    -brain has melted-
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  • From kogaluver on July 04, 2007
    Oh shit. Just a comment on what BlueUtopiah said. Definitely put that anal fox tail plug up Yusuke's ass. If you do that I will be totally brain dead. ^_~

    Fuck, I never sign in. I always forget. Whatever.
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  • From ANON - The laughing corpse on July 04, 2007
    I am going to kidnap you one day and do things to you. I heart you more than ever right now. Kurama's totally evil and sexy making Yuusuke his bitch. Can't wait to see what else you dish out.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 03, 2007
    Oh jesus god. *insert more wibbling here* You know, this kind of hardcore stuff is really rare in the YYH fandom, and it's about time someone started writing it. I've actually been friends with people who have a full Master/Slave relationships and it is an interesting phenomenon. Although it's not for me, I totally respect their choice and they seem blissfully happy living like that. You really illustrated just how it goes: total control, from what to say, how to look, where to stand...EVERYTHING. That's exactly the way it goes. I'm glad you're writing this, because it'll show some people that BDSM/DM thing isn't just furry handcuffs with a bit of spanking.

    If you put fox-tail anal plugs in this I'll just die.

    Heh. You wrote Kurama very hot. Just keep doing what you're doing because you're doing it right. And the Hiei/Karasu nod? Pure genius. I'll totally be your mouthy uke just for that. TRUEFAX.
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  • From kogaluver on July 03, 2007
    Yays!!!!!!! It's even better reading it posted *flails hands up in the air* This was beyond hot and erotic. I can't wait for more training and more discipline! Kurama is such a sinisterly creative fox (is sinisterly a word, lol) This is so going to be my new fav fic. Thanks for the fresh porn!!!

    Your Mistress is very pleased and you will be rewarded ^_^
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