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Reviews for Hot Mazoku Action

By : sefiru
  • From AmyMcClair on February 16, 2008
    Oh boy. You're right, Hiei got a big surprise. (Pun intended.) I can't wait to see what happens next and what will happen when the fox joins the mix. Ooo good times for all. ;P
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  • From yaoihentai69 on February 16, 2008
    mm mm good. XD i'm loving this so. can't wait for more!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on February 15, 2008
    UNG. I really should review when I'm more coherent, but this was so good I'll try to make some sense.

    The line that killed me dead was: his youki was thick enough to drown in. So many points for not only using the changes in youki, but also for giving Yusuke a Mazoku form and having Hiei broadcast through the Jagan. I love Jagan usage in a lemon.

    You also managed to convey a lot of feeling and emotion in this chapter, and jeez - the lemon was smoking hot. I can't wait for another chapter!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on February 13, 2008
    Heh. Yusuke on the throne reading manga? I could see that perfectly. And I like how Hiei offered himself, and what Yusuke said in response. You have those two characterized very well, and keeping them in character - especially with lemons in the mix - is difficult.

    I can't wait for the lemon.
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  • From ANON - Angela on February 10, 2008
    aff.net ate my review...... O__o

    there are not enough Y/h/k fics out there and i love what you're doing with this. ^^ can't wait to see how kurama handles this. ;D
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  • From ANON - Angela on February 10, 2008
    evil evil T__T making us wait and drawing it out. but i haven't had this much fun with a yyh fic in a long time, so
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  • From AmyMcClair on February 10, 2008
    OMG! "Do you top or bottom?" I think I about died, reading that. Poor Hiei doesn't even know what he is getting himself into, does he?

    I am really enjoying this story. Sorry I didn't find it sooner, or I would have left you reviews before this. I guess better late than never.
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  • From Hemamal on February 10, 2008
    That went over easily. Finally we get to some lemon!! I thought he was going to lay Kurama first(LOVE YxK!!!!) but I can wait for that. I hope Hiei eats well!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tephra on February 10, 2008
    Thanks for updating! I’m really enjoying your story. I like that you’re not afraid to use words like milquetoast and sanguine. I also like that you’re not rushing the plot to the detriment of the story. However, I’m eagerly awaiting the next chapter and death by anticipation is not pretty.
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  • From ANON - Katonie on February 09, 2008
    Stringing along is NOT FUN FOR ME!!!!Oh the agony! You make me wait even more?! You really are cruel.*wimperpoutwimper*
    *puppy dog eyes*Please upate again soon. I need to see some "Good Stuff"*winkwinknudgenudge* soon! And I'm sure various other readers do as well.
    Oh! You're bringing Kurama in soon too, right? I can't wait for even more Hotness to ensue.You know what else is REALLY HOT?! A Botton Hiei! I love you for that, by the way.
    Anyway, like I said, update again soon, then I can review again soon too!! Make me happy and I'll give you Hugs & Kisses!!

    Hugs & Kisses

    Katonie
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  • From yaoihentai69 on February 08, 2008
    XD ooooooooooo! Now i'm all jumping around in anticipation. I'm really glad Hiei got away and to someplace MUCH better. ^o^ Can't wait to read the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
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  • From kerbear on February 08, 2008
    yay it a chapter!!!And wow Yusukes really going to Have Hiei.I can't wait for the next chapter.Wait till Kurama hears Hiei got it first .This should be fun(I hope)Keeping me on the edgw of the seat is so mean.:)
    I hope you update soon,great job
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  • From sephrothlay on February 08, 2008
    lol

    loved the chapter.

    You know how to keep me on suspence

    When is kurama going to be back on the scene?
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  • From kitkit on February 08, 2008
    lemons are coming up, yum. i do hope to see yusuke on the bottom eventual
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  • From ANON - JLA on January 30, 2008
    AHHHHH! Just when it was getting good! lol

    I can't wait to see what this talk is going to turn out like!
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