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Reviews for ~Tried...and True?~

By : Metranome
  • From mhmartini on March 06, 2010
    Hey there! I know it's been a while since you updated, and it's probably strange getting a review out of the blue, but I was wondering if you've given up this story? I hope not, but the prospects of you continuing it seem bleak. Anyway, I was just going through some old favorites and reread this one. I still enjoy it.

    So if you do come back and write more, I look forward to it. If not, at least know that someone still reads it.
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  • From Fangirl66 on August 06, 2009
    I love how great this story is! Haha I can already tell our little Hiei is going to get quite angry over all the attention Aka will be showering upon Kurama! Please update soon! XD

    Cheers,
    Fangirl66
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  • From Amiwryn on November 21, 2008
    DUDE. RANDO.

    This is a most intriguing mission, and already we can see there are going to be some problems. I love how the transformation is making the boys' less controlled. You made it a great way to particularly give more insight to the way Hiei thinks and acts, like his disdain for irritating people no matter what form he's in, and in general there's such a personal quality to all of the descriptions here that I don't see in many other fics. I laughed several times at the sarcasm. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 24, 2008
    Awsome is all i can say.
    update soon ^^
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  • From BlueUtopiah on October 23, 2008
    I think that, despite your concerns, the chapter flowed very well and you managed to get in a lot of the plot points without overloading or confusing the reader. I so enjoyed Rando's appearance and how each of the Reikai Tantei were shifted into kitsune form. Hiei must look so cute! And Yusuke and Hiei's rough-and-tumble fight was very amusing. I always enjoy reading your stories, I get absorbed from the beginning and just ride with it. I can't wait for more!
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  • From 66Hiei08 on October 22, 2008
    Me luvviess sequels.. Got high hopes for this one ;o)
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  • From Amiwryn on August 01, 2008
    Fanfic art for chapter "Internal Conflict" posted here:
    http://amiwryn.deviantart.com/art/Hiei-Kurama-93444008
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  • From lildemonicfoofoo on July 05, 2008
    *runs up and huggles ya* I am very very sorry if i sounded (god is that even a proper word) so negative on my last review. unfortunately my sarcasm runs a bit deep. You and your lovely writting style are like butterfly kisses in a worid of sweat covered fornacating smut lover, sweet and refreshing. Please give your muse a cookie. ^and now i wait............yep. *sigh*

    contest unfair to those whom cant draw however i do draw a excellent stick figure. *runs off to get art supplies*

    *cough* get the posting my friend reviewers arent a patient bunch, well fine i am not.
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  • From lildemonicfoofoo on July 05, 2008
    umm really cant complain about the spread of OCC (dun dun dunnn) cause Hiei was occ the minute his dialogue exceeded 15 words
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  • From BlueUtopiah on June 06, 2008
    Huzzah for chapter 2! That lemon scene where Hiei was desperate and needy but couldn't acknowledge it was heartbreaking. I especially liked how you put Don't...Don't leave...Don't leave me...Don't leave me alone! throughout it. Very well-written. I'm glad that Kurama is stable enough, and Hiei is trusting enough, to out the problem and deal with it. At least they're acting maturely and discussing it and Hiei is learning...

    I can't help but worry about this upcoming mission though...

    You write so well, I can't wait for chapter 3!
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  • From Amiwryn on May 24, 2008
    The angst is really exquisite, and what's great is that your dialogue sounds so much like what they'd really say that I can hear their voices. Hiei, being desperate to dominate Kurama in order to keep him "if only for a moment" (that was incredibly hot, by the way), and then feeling bad about it just -kills-. And of course, Kurama, being him, gets to be all understanding about it.... I love the dynamics between them. I also really wonder how this is all going to fit into the secret mission that Koenma needs Kurama for.

    I'll definitely try a fanart if I can =D
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  • From RChan on May 21, 2008
    By the blessed winds you LIVE Metranome! I had wondered for the longest time whether or not you were still around or if you had just given up on the fandom entirely. I am so happy to see a sequel to one of my favourite fics! You have no idea ^_^. I am also a little envious as I have not had the time to finish up Trials of a Youkai's heart... That fic's been a W.I.P for about 2 or more years now... What can I say, my spare time is like zero. However, I am glad you are keeping your passion alive :hug: Drop me an email some time eh? I haven't talked to you in forever.
    Oh, and just so you know, the server I had my former email adress at died, so it's bchan_the_dream_weaver@yahoo.ca now... if you ever get the time to drop me a hi ^^;
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  • From Amiwryn on April 27, 2008
    I really like how Hiei is hating to be uncertain and confesses to Yusuke what he's worried about only after they've sparred. It's very in character, especially the quips from Yusuke. I'm dying to find out what this new mission from Koenma is going to be about. You're an awesome writer!
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  • From RoseThorne on March 31, 2008
    Good job getting me back into reading YYH. Keep in mind that to a certain extent Hiei opened himself to the possibility of change in "Once Burned." I don't see this as OOC, but rather an evolution of character. Please continue!
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  • From mhmartini on March 30, 2008
    I'm so excited to see another story from you! I know I never fully reviewed "Once Burned" and for that I apologize. But I loved it, and I am loving this sequel so far. Sounds interesting. And your summary at the beginning has me completely hooked. Kurama/Hiei are mmy OTP and you write them so well.

    About the IC part - you gave our guys enough experience to grow in "Once Burned." I would not expect them to start this story in the same character they had in the anime/manga. You wrote a convincing tale of their growth and change, so even if they seem OOC from their canon selves, they are IC for your universe. I really think the fanfics that take the characters and grow them and change them in a believable way are the best-written ones. To me, that's the beauty of fanfic. So write on with confidence, and I will read on with the same.
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