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Reviews for Life Goes On

By : 66Hiei08
  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2008
    I have to tell you your work is trully amazing! I never read a story were it just get to your soul and that what your story did to me. I hope you keep writing more stories and please do more inyuasha stories. I love your last works totally, I world stay up all night just reading it over and over. I also grateful that you update your stories in a few short days. hell most peoples stories your wating for like months to review and they don't. So Go You!!! Rock On and Please Blow me away with Your stories!!!!!
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  • From kerbear on July 26, 2008
    Clap clap clap.It was a great story and I look forward to any/all side stories.
    A small look into the future with the kids could be nice.
    Gtreat job
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  • From thothmoon on July 26, 2008
    Excellent ending! And quite a hot one, I might add. Maybe sometime I'll do some more art pertaining to your stories--I've always loved the visual image I get everytime you describe the offspring as "hissing", so maybe that could be something eventually XP I agree with you: after this, everything coming together as it has, there probably can't be another long story like this or its predecessors. Shorter side-stories or oneshots might be interesting, though, what with all the characters you used/created and a lot of stuff happening here in the last story. I certainly wouldn't mind seeing some ^_^ Until whenever that might happen, though, great closing!
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  • From cahepyp on July 26, 2008
    Heh, nice ending for a great story. You had me riveted for the last 20 chapters waiting to see what was gonna happen. Can't wait to see whatever your doing next. Good Job.
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  • From kerbear on July 25, 2008
    Wow,92 chapters and your just concerned now if its to long.lol, And no its not.So you killed the only lady
    lord and gave it to Hiei,is Koenma going to tell her Hiei took it before she leaves? And how is Hiei going to handle the news about Yusuke,did Yusuke know what he was doing when he let him go.Lots of questions to still answer.I can't wait for the next update already.
    Great job as always
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  • From thothmoon on July 24, 2008
    Big changes in these most recent chapters, mm? Climactic scene (pun not intended?) between Hiei and Yusuke coming up, eh?

    I like Ryuji's sentiment about the hole. If you're gonna have to wreck something and take the heat for it, may as well have it be something astronomical
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  • From thothmoon on July 22, 2008
    Oh, was it "blunettes" that confused? ^_^ I meant Yukina and Shishi-reincarnate.

    I like the point Ryuji made to Yusuke. Now if he remembers to apply it, the progression, it is tangible!

    And I completely understand the whole fickle tedious connection thing. No worries; I am patient.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 20, 2008
    Heh. I knew you were just joking, it's fine. Call me crazy, but I really like Hiei with Ryuji, they have a nice chemistry. However, it's just right that Hiei is with Yusuke, Yusuke can take care of him. I hope that Hiei is able to accept that love and heal himself, he's still disturbed by those years he spent as Shi. And Ryuji will certainly give Yomi a ruhn for his money. Yomi needs a strong Beta to challenge him anyway, and Kurama is taken.

    And LOL on the baby-reincarnation screw-up! Onis just can't be trusted to do important work. And Kurama being all vicious when he wa giving birth was hysterical. That's all Kurama needs: three more boy kits. He's going to have his hands full for awhile.
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  • From thothmoon on July 18, 2008
    Tsk-tsk. Damn those self-esteem issues. I sense a very intense conversation between two intimate brunettes, with the possible addition of a redhead, in the near future. And I do hope the "bluenettes" don't make themselves scarce.
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  • From kerbear on July 18, 2008
    So we are finally going to know what bothering Hiei in his own words(or his brothers)Poor Yusuke bouncing between to sets of new babies.wondering How Kurama really feels about all this as well.
    Great job as always
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  • From thothmoon on July 17, 2008
    Ah, so Shishi went to the wrong body. Well, at least he'll get to have cool-colored hair again, and he'll still be around Hiei so I don't see any major damage there.

    Sucks that you killed off Pehjo! Ugh, but you did characterize him a lot beforehand, and it's redeemable because of everything that happened due to it. Good job weaving everything together; it's all becoming pretty whole... And making Mukuro have a braint tumor was pretty original. A lot of people like to just make her this pissy little bitch, but you gave an actual cause for her, uh, eccentric behavior.

    And I loved that scene where Yusuke was watching the kids' tail-play all "Okay ... I'm growing concerned"-like. One of the funnier scenes while I caught up ^-^ So I definitely think we're in the falling action; looking forward to what happens next.
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  • From kerbear on July 16, 2008
    Thank god for family.I really thought you might have let Hiei go.I lost this bet, since you wrote it where do you want me to send the cookies I have to make.Yomi looks like he'll have his hands full as well.Great bunch of chapters and I can't wait for the next one.
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  • From kerbear on July 12, 2008
    Please tell me your going to let Hiei live through this to at least see his children and his brothers kids grow up
    somewhat.Wow Yomi's thoughts should be going around in circles with everything he could get out of this.
    Still very much hoping you let Hiei live.
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  • From kerbear on July 11, 2008
    Poor Yusuke must feel stuck between a rock and a hard place,and great sex or not can't be happy about being put to sleep as it were.Poor Hiei,it brings tears to the eyes.Yet I still think that his (Hieis')kids have something up their sleeves.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 10, 2008
    I wish I could read and review as fast as you update, but I've been here and I'm reading!

    It's such a bad situation for Yusuke, and now for Ryuji. I mean, they want to save their mate, but they also can't kill and innocent child/children. I don't know who's situation is worse: Hiei's because he's so angsty and thinks he deserves to die (which is so sad), or Ryuji's since he only got to spend a short time with his mate and now his mate's going to die. I like that you aren't afraid to kill off characters.

    I also like that you've written in the children's reactions, and Imiko and Chiisai wondering just how they're related was adorable. I just hope Mukuro can stop being such a bitch and help Hiei when he needs it. Maybe Yomi will convince her otherwise.
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