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Reviews for Scopophilia

By : PsychedelicSunflower
  • From ANON - foxykura on October 16, 2012
    I love this. There aren't enough Yomi/Kurama FICS out there. Please continue this! Your writing is wonderful.
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  • From nurdgurl714 on April 11, 2011
    Loves it! I'm such a Yomi fan. Keep this up, please!
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  • From zekesbabe on March 06, 2011
    I love it. I love Yomi and Kurama together, I am semi-hiatus with my own because mine is one of those weaker ones that I mentioned last time lol!

    I also like the imagery you use and how...I don't know what the word is but it's basically well written, contains a lot of description which a lot of people forget is key, the good descriptions that is. A lot of people would just say for example a room. Room of what? Brick? Metal? Leaves? And it sounds weird but I like the real description...and then you've got Yomi's sadism which I adore anyway :D

    I can honestly say I'm looking forward to your next update.

    Zx
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  • From zekesbabe on March 04, 2011
    It's an interesting start, the usual difficulty that most people don't think about is how to render Kurama powerless. There is usually a half baked attempt halfway through the actual story and it fails, but it makes sense here, although if this demon believed Kurama to be a human I don't see the reason for poisoning him but hey its your story lol! ‘This isn’t any random attack, this is too improvised," you're contradicting yourself here. This isn't a random attack means that this is a planned attack, however to improvise means to make it up as you go along.

    Looking forward to an update.
    Zx
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