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Reviews for Journey Into Submission

By : ryukotsusei
  • From redeyedemon on December 24, 2011
    This ends here? Seriously? I'm in absolutely no way okay with that.... I'm seriously hooked on this, and that's saying something, because I love Kurama, but I've always wanted to read something were he just snapped and went completely over the edge, and here I have it, and... It just drops off the end of the Earth. Before it even got to the Yuskue/Hiei bit, which is so not okay....

    I mean, I don't even know if there's more of this somewhere hidden away in a secret vault somewhere that would complete my life, but if there is, it would be awesome... Just saying.
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  • From wolfkin59 on March 24, 2010
    Oh, that's an awesome read. I admit, I'm not used to reading Kurama as evil, but you've managed to spin that portrayal well.
    I look forward to reading more.
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  • From reamane21 on November 17, 2008
    what happen next.
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  • From ANON - stephanie aka menchi-kun on October 24, 2008
    i got your story from this author of a fanfiction who recommeneded yours and i was completely blown away......i mean i was practically holding my breath the entire time... i dont think ive ever felt so much for hiei and yusuke pairing but im a solid fan now....all credit to you.... and i dont think ive ever read any fic that made me hate kurama so much...he's usually paired with kagome from inuyasha and is all canon sweet and shit but the way you portrayed him was so real and ....it just kept me on the edge of my seat....

    im going to wrap this up and go look at your profile to see if you got any more great fics as this ....if not i will put this on my favs list on my tool bar right now and check evry so often to see if you added to this amazing story.....

    by the way i also quoted you ....im a quote freak...yeah one of those ppl.... its when hiei was first talking to youko "you fool.....you just dont realize it yet." that one yeah....awesome....anyway update soon and good luck with the rest of the story

    ja ne!
    menchi-kun
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  • From ANON - courtney on May 09, 2008
    hey love the story. When are you going to updat? I hope it's soon
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  • From ANON - ScentedAvocado on March 26, 2008
    You write some of the best stories I've EVER read in this fandom, whether it's here or over at ffnet. And that's saying a lot, because I've read a lot of stuff over time.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 17, 2008
    Please update soon, I'm interested to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - kerbear on December 04, 2007
    Update please!!! Its a great story and I can't wait to see what happens to Kurama or what Hiei is going to do next
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  • From Staphanie on November 11, 2007
    hey its been three months whats happening at least let us know if your done with thw story so we can move on cuase some of us would like for you to finish the story cuase it is very well writen and would like to know hoe it ends. :)
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  • From Hemamal on October 21, 2007
    This story is dangerous!! I hope nobody gets ideas!!:)
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  • From ANON - Shedding Ink on October 02, 2007
    I hate myspace! I really do.. But after wondering why you suddenly stopped updating at your normal pace I grew curious and checked it out.

    I read about your condition. At first it sounded like Bell's Palsy but I think that only paralyses one side of your face.. It shouldn't affect your hands.

    I just want you to know that that your health is more important than updates. Can't believe I'm saying that, I've been dying for a chapter 8, but I'd rather your problem go away.

    Get well.. Soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 01, 2007
    OMG, I'm reading this like a horror novel. It's disturbing how each time I get upset but I can't quit because I hope Yusuke's going to have his sweet revenge. I just hope they aren't going to have a romantic ending of some sort, that would have been totally unbelievable.

    KowaiiAngel
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on September 24, 2007
    This story is a-freakin-mazing!!!! Oh my God! At first I was wary to read it because of how it started off, but once I did, I became enraptured. It's too good to not read the end of. It's like a really good novel you never want to put down! Truly, as brutal as the happenings, this plot is too great to ignore!! You must update soon! I have to know if Keiko's okay! Gahhhhhh!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shedding Ink on September 22, 2007
    Please don't listen to that idiot anon. What you did was great. Its not like they'd all be buddies for life anyway. Not after Yusuke's demon heritage popped. Kuwabara would age and die and they wouldn't.

    I love that you brought out Kurama's sadistic side. Everyone seems to paint him as this girly fluffy little slut for their stories. They seem to forget that Kurama, Yoko in particular, wasn't someone to mess with. Inside that pretty little head lies the mind of a cold hearted killer. Yeah.. sure he says Yoko won't come back.. but in fanfiction you can wake up the sexy bastard.

    The only part I didn't like was Botan coming on to Yusuke. Eww.. But it was worth the discomfort to see the psychotic Kurama afterwards. And though i love the dark Kurama you've given us, I can't wait to see more between Hiei and Yusuke, which is my favorite pairing.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on September 19, 2007
    And obviously Anon loves the sweet Mary-Sue stories where no one gets hurt and everyone is fluffy. Nice job coward, how about leaving your name and some real concrit next time instead of just flailing like an idiot?

    No...you try harder. And grammar is your friend, as well as capitalization. You might want to look into that.
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