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Reviews for ENEMY AMONG US

By : ShioriFoxiesMom
  • From AmyMcClair on January 12, 2008
    First, Happy Birthday!

    Second, I really am enjoying this story. I hope that Hiei can convince Kurama to take him back. Heaven help him if he leaves Kurama again. I hope you can update this again soon.
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  • From EnchanteNoir on January 12, 2008
    YAY I love this story, and by the God and Goddess is Kurama ever stubborn. *Shakes her head* Good thing Hiei is strong willed and even more stubborn. *Nods* I have been looking forward to this update for a while and I am not disappointed. Your writing of the lemon was extremely sensual and desperate... I loved that it made it seem like Kurama's heart spoke true when he was in the throes of pleasure... they always say you speak your heart when you're least expecting it. Wonderful chapter. Also thank you for your review on Sensual Sadism, and I'm glad I could have the update up in time for a birthday present to you :). I should have the next chapter out within the next couple of weeks... maybe sooner depends on how fast I type it. Once again wonderful chapter and I look forward to your next update. Happy Birthday!!!
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  • From ANON - kerbear on January 12, 2008
    Happy Happy Birthday!!It seems Kurama isn't going to make this easy on Hiei,getting back together that is.
    I'm thinking now that Hiei has the gang and Kuramas mom for backing it won't be long though.The demon world
    and training to be a lord will have to be on a back burner for a while(hope Hiei can do it).As always it was
    a great chapter and a long lemon and I can't wait for the next update.
    Hope your birthday was everything you hoped for and more.
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  • From LadyLaran on January 12, 2008
    Wonderful job! Kurama's going to have a hard time keeping Hiei out of his heart. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!
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  • From sonykit on January 12, 2008
    wah!!!such a wonderful chapter! when kurama returned to his room to find that hiei was not there, i felt my heart drop. but hiei isn't about to give up on him, ha! i love the sex-does-not-fix-everything mentality of kurama and the way he so tries to resist hiei. but hiei wouldn't be hiei if he wasn't determined and stubborn. i love the way he treats kurama, so protective, possessive and sweet. more inspiration to your writing! ;)
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  • From ANON - Sandra on January 10, 2008
    Please update!
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  • From sonykit on January 06, 2008
    wonderful! sakura finally died a painful and humiliating death! ha! hiei's timing is once again impeccable. vulnerable-kurama is cute and tugs at the heartstrings. they are finally together again! great job! ;)
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  • From BlueUtopiah on January 06, 2008
    You know that you're evil for stopping there, right? GO HIEI, TOP THAT FOX - HE'S NEEDY!

    I enjoyed Hiei cutting Sakura into little pieces and then burning him, it put a smile on my face.
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  • From AmyMcClair on January 05, 2008
    Oh, that's just cruel. If you don't update soon, I will pout.

    Really, I loved that the antidote was hidden in the vase. It was the ultimate slap in the face to Kurama: Hide the one thing he wants the most, right in front of his face. That was great. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Sandra on January 04, 2008
    Wow, that had me in tears (although I do cry easily). Hope you update this soon!
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  • From ANON - kerbear on January 04, 2008
    No screw ups that I could see.A great chapter as always.The surprise on Sakura's face at Hiei's appearance was great.It was interresting to see even after everything they'd all been through thst Kurama was surprised that everyone was worried about him.What about the cops now though.Can't wait for the next chapter and Hiei showing Kurama just how much he does care.Its going to be so very hot .......can't wait.
    Great job
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  • From ANON - kit on January 03, 2008
    PLEASE!!!!!!I BEG YOU!!!!!!you can not possibly allow that vile creature to hurt kurama!!!he was foolish,yes, but he doesn't deserve that fate!i was hyperventilating by the time i got to the last part!you won't do that to kurama, right?please?pretty please?pretty please with hiei-hugging-kurama on top?hope you update soon!real great cliff hanger!though i really hope you won't let anything bad happen to him. ;)
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  • From AmyMcClair on January 03, 2008
    "Those who represent themselves have fools for clients." Kurama did do well, but you never talk without a lawyer. Even Lawyers won't talk without a lawyer representing them.

    Anyway, I really enjoyed that chapter. Sakura is a sado-masochistic bastard isn't he? I hope he gets his. I'm just not sure who I want to give it to him. Can't wait to read the next installment.
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  • From ANON - kerbear on January 01, 2008
    Oh my,your not really going to let Sakura take Kurama are you?And yes,I can't believe you left it there till
    next time.Hiei and Yusuke are really going to hurt Sakura bad.I can't wait to see this.I know work beckons
    but I hope you update soon.
    Great job
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  • From AmyMcClair on January 01, 2008
    Oh, that last little action by Kurama was just perfect. I am really getting into this story. I hope you can update soon. Thank you for taking time out of your holidays to write.
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