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Reviews for ENEMY AMONG US

By : ShioriFoxiesMom
  • From ANON - kerbear on December 23, 2007
    Wow,now what?Poor Hiei is going to smell that fool on Kurama and what give up?(hope not)How will Kurama
    let everyone know about him and his mother?Kurama and Hiei and a mind link don't they? being lovers and all.
    This is going to get bloody but I wouldn't miss it for anything.I can't wait for sakura to learn just how protective the group is of each other.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2007
    impressive! More hot steamy smex! Karasu's brother is so evil!
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  • From ANON - kerbear on December 23, 2007
    So who's going to catch Sakura's intentions first,Kewa or one of the girls?Maybe Hiei's sister.This is a great start to what looks like an interresting story (chapter2).Its going to be fun watching Hiei accept help from everyone and boy can they mess with Sakuras mind if they want to.Poor Kurama caught in the middle,I hope you don't let him get to hurt,metal or otherwise.
    Can't wait to see where you take this,great job so far (as always)
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  • From LadyLaran on December 22, 2007
    Fight and Kurama as the prize? Ruh roh...that's not going to be a good attitude to have around our favorite fox. LOL!
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  • From ANON - Shuu on December 22, 2007
    Okay I read your stories ALL the time but never review because I don't really feel like it most of the time but this one I will, you HAVE to update this and finish it! I love it and want to know more!
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  • From ANON - Hemamal on December 22, 2007
    Hmm, what is Sakura hiding! If he hurts my fox he won't have to worry about Hiei killing him!!
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  • From whispirahangel on December 22, 2007
    Please do NOT say that's the end!!! Oh Inari! NO! Hiei and Kurama belong together! I love the story, please keep it going! I look forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - KyoHana on December 21, 2007
    WOW!!! You've got ANOTHER great beginning to what I know is going to be one terrific, very angsty, very trying time for our favorite demon couple. As always, they're already on the road to mis-communication and mis-interpretation. And why is it I get the feeling there's more to Yoshi than meets the eye... and that Kurama's headed for BIG trouble?!?!
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  • From quillbabe on December 21, 2007
    if that's the end... I'm going to cry! that was incredibly sad! HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!
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  • From thothmoon on December 21, 2007
    INTERESTING. Hiei sounds down and out at the moment, but I wonder if this Yoshi fellow is an enemy in the sense of a rival for Kurama's affections of an enemy in a larger sense too... Well, I'll wait around to find out, then.
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  • From LadyLaran on December 21, 2007
    Hiei has gone and done it this time. Silly fire demon, letting that sweet fox go! :-) Great story, Shiori!
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  • From ANON - NyteKit on December 20, 2007
    This is nice. A continuation, too, I hope. I like how you started it out, with a sense of the calm before the storm. Great job!
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