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Reviews for In His Place

By : AmyMcClair
  • From Angelkitty7888 on November 25, 2008
    Wow....... that was really deep........ BUT SO AWESOME!!!!!! I like your imagery and even though some of the dark stuff is creepy it is the wonderfull kind of creepy... i like your interpurtation of their relationship and their thoughts... (btw i found you through your editing for AmyMcClair You write as wonderfully as you edit lol)
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  • From BlueUtopiah on October 15, 2008
    How could I have forgotten to review this? Oh, because I suck.

    That lemon was hot. *fans self* When Yusuke has the second finger in and Hiei whimpers...gyah. You really know how to deliver on the smex.

    And I liked the whole lesson: that Hiei needed to understand loss in the light of love, he needed to understand true loss. And Kurama was delicious as always, you wrote him perfectly.
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  • From HeartStar on October 02, 2008
    very nice

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  • From yaoihentai69 on August 31, 2008
    kyaaa! I loved this! So glad it all worked out. You did an awesome job. ^^
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  • From mhmartini on August 27, 2008
    And somehow I missed this story until now. I'm glad I finally found it. It's very good.

    I'm a sucker for emotional and psychological torment, and using that torment in a "positive" way (relatively speaking) is brilliant. I enjoyed the little twists you gave it at the end; I particularly enjoyed the role you gave the Greek god brothers as you explained it in the end. Very creative, yet mythologically sound.

    Great story and great ending!
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  • From ANON - kerbear on August 27, 2008
    Much much better now.Though greedily I'd still love to see more on their relationship(Hiei & Yusuke).
    Shame on AFF for messing with it.
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  • From ANON - ShibuNoNeko on August 27, 2008
    So sorry about the last review, I suppose there was a glitch or something. Gomen! I really liked this story it had a really good plot and the Yusuke/Hiei action was just great^_^
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  • From 66Hiei08 on August 27, 2008
    I found this to be a very interesting and unique concept. Good job.
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  • From ANON - ShibuNoNeko on August 27, 2008
    Is that the ending? It just stops in the middle of a sentence and what about the dreams and Diemos? Yusukes claiming of Hiei isn't even there. If it's the end, then it's rather disappointing.
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  • From ANON - kerbear on August 26, 2008
    Wait just a minute here.How can that be the last chapter with everything unfinished?
    The dreams
    The brothers of woe
    The conversation with Kurama
    The claiming of Hiei/freeing of Hiei
    Theres way to much left unsaid here to end it there,what a disapointment.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on July 11, 2008
    Very nice Yusuke-Hiei interaction. I like how they just understand each other without speaking. And Hiei controlling Mukuro? WIN. Thank you for using Hiei's majin form, that never gets enough press. And wow - Phobos is going to have his hands full torturing Mukuro, but I don't feel good about the whole Demios factor...
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  • From thothmoon on July 02, 2008
    Hostile takeover much? And he does it just oh so tidily too. (Er ... I'm fairly sure that "tidily" is a word.) No doubt with his analysis of the torture-visions and the way he interacted with Yusuke and Kurama that your Hiei is very IC, just sort of Hn, this is this, that is that, I'll be back--gone. I wonder, due to the visions, if he's gone to see Yukina now.
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  • From ANON - kerbear on July 02, 2008
    Its great to finally see an update to this story and I hope to see more of it.Poor Yusuke worring
    for what would seem nothing and than Hiei being so cold to him.And Kurama stuck in the middle.Lots to sort
    through,I hope the wait isn't along one to find out what happens
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  • From yaoihentai69 on July 02, 2008
    oh my. I'm in love with this. I hope Hiei hurries back before Yusuke sinks into depression or something. T_T Really nice fic. Can't wait for more!
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  • From BlueUtopiah on March 15, 2008
    Sorry I have been slacking in reviews. I enjoyed both of these chapters and should have told you so earlier than this.

    That being said, I love Phobos and Deimos. I can tell you've done your research, and that makes a fanfic 10X better. Your Kurama is deliciously in-character, you do him justice. And the Hiei-Yusuke bond? Romantic, at least to me. Actually, all the bois are wonderfully in-character. It's hard to write Hiei and have him break, it's got to be done carefully and just right. You did so.

    I want to see more! Is it kicking Mukuro's ass tiems nao?
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