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Reviews for The Aftermath

By : 66Hiei08
  • From thothmoon on February 10, 2008
    Sweet, I knew that Yomi was onto something XD

    So, key things I'm looking at at the moment, aside of course from the rescue/retrieval itself, is Sabaktu and his child, of course, Shishi and his, along with him and Touya and how that may play out, and Hiei's starting to seem like he's getting too--well, comfortable isn't the correct word, but--with this routine... Well, off to read the sequel now!
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  • From kerbear on February 09, 2008
    You put the reviews on but didn't finish the story.How mean of you.Yomi knows it was Hiei and still won't help
    (no surprise there)With Yomi little bit of info Yusuke and everyone could go in there and find out on their own.And kick some butt,but will Hiei even want to face them after everything he's been through.Please finish this story.
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  • From kerbear on February 08, 2008
    If I beg can Hiei get a reprive or something.How mach more can poor Hiei take without completely
    loseing himself. ..Ok I'm on my knees.please let someone that can really help find them
    :) Great job so far and can't wait for the next set of chapters.
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  • From thothmoon on February 08, 2008
    Hm--you might be right. I've seen Yomi/Kurama of course, Yomi/Mukuro, even Yomi/Shizuru and Yomi/Kaito--but I'm unsure if I've really seen a Yomi/Hiei. ^__^ But you don't portray Yomi as a self-absorbed rapacious villain, so I'm going to count on him having some sort of intuition toward this encounter that can prove beneficial for the entire family.

    By the way, this is a cruel place to leave off. I go away on most weekends, including this one, so this is just going to build up until Sunday evening. If this is still the latest installment by the time I leave today, guess what I'm going to do first thing when I come back Sunday evening? ^_^
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  • From kyokohina on February 07, 2008
    This store is one of the best. It be cool if yusuka got pregnant as well. Butthe pregnay inthisstory are srange I mean no one has had morng sickness or back ach ,etc i mean its like there all haveng perfect pregnancys. Does it have todo with the fact that there demans???But any way great story I look forward for more.Sorry about the spelling.
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  • From thothmoon on February 07, 2008
    Psychic? Hm ... well, some people in Mother's family have seen ghosts, but as for myself, I guess I'm just good at picking out the subtlest of foreshadowings or something XD

    I like that they named one of the kits after Kuwabara, especially since out of the three he was closest to Yusuke and Kurama (not that he and Hiei hated each other like they pretended to, but). I'm *still* wondering about the outcome at the brothel, especially now that Shishi's been thrown in there as well, so don't make us wait too long for an update (what am I talking about? That's essentially a non-issue with you!) ^_^
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  • From solitare1 on February 07, 2008
    I am so happy for Kurama....I feel for Hiei and Yusuke and their babies.
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  • From thothmoon on February 07, 2008
    Oh yeah, I'd forgotten that Hiei was ... special, as a child (and he was able to cut up demons when he was what, three or so?). And I just assumed that the boys didn't get tear gems because Hiei was for the most part male.

    So, Koenma *doesn't* know where they are. Hm, I'm wondering if maybe they'll have to have a repeat of Kuwabara before they'll be able to find the location. Also, I'm wondering how a certain ice apparition's going to react when he hears about what's become of Shishi, from some little things that've been dropped.
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  • From thothmoon on February 07, 2008
    Oh--wow, I think you updated while I was reviewing, maybe, unless I missed a chapter before reviewing *shrugs* You have me a bit curious about the way that Hiei's twins are ... structured? At first I was thinking of babies like human infants, but the way they're portrayed makes them sound like they have more developed motor skills (which, not being human, I guess could make sense), like puppies or kittens or something (probably emphasized by the way their feeding is described). But, you said you'd expand on them later, so....
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  • From thothmoon on February 07, 2008
    Hiei/Shishi. You're right; that's a very uncommon pairing, but I could see some complementary qualities between the two, so it's not entirely out of the realm of possiblity. Touya and Shishi is another one that I don't believe I've ever encountered (it seems that Shishi, when one encounters him in yaoi stories, is always paired up with Suzuka, so). So that's pretty cool that you're experimenting with this essentially unheard of pairings. Personally, I was wondering if this was where it might go after Kichiro got ahold of him, and the results should prove very--okay, I overuse this word so much someone should smack me--interesting.

    And I like the irritable birthing Kurama! It's understandable and I think quite realistic. Plus maybe their record of Shishi being impregnated could help them pinpoint his and Hiei's and Sabaktu's location, and Hiei can spend more than just a chapter or two out of captivity or refuge ^__^ But I get the need to torture your favorite; there's half a dozen, at least, people around here with the Fox Torture Fetish, so why not a ... HTF? JTF? KTF? Bah, depends on what you prefer to call him. Well now, this is getting to be a lengthy review, so I'll just leave it there (don't have much else to say, anyhow). Looking forward to where this progresses, as always.
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  • From kerbear on February 06, 2008
    How could you,Poor Hiei from one evil to another.I thought Hiei suffered enough already being made to call
    his own son master,how can he and his infants be freed now?I hope Yusuke Kicks some serious a-- here soon.
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  • From thothmoon on February 06, 2008
    Well, at least Kichiro has only marked Hiei as a possession. At first I was wondering if you'd be twisted enough to have him mark Hiei like Sabaktu was. And I was wondering, earlier, about the comment among the Shinobi about Shishi--this should prove *interesting*.
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  • From BlueUtopiah on February 06, 2008
    Oh man...Hiei is just going to be a mess when Yusuke finally gets him back. The poor thing, he can just never catch a break! As much as I feel bad though, I love the Hiei torture, he's my favourite character too.

    The interaction between Kurama and Yusuke is sweet but sad. They do love each other, but I can see how their love isn't as all-encompassing as it should be because they miss Hiei. And I really like how you're portraying Koenma as well. He's not just humour fodder for the show, he really is a godling and occasionally acts like one.

    I look forward to this story every day. :D
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  • From thothmoon on February 05, 2008
    Ichiro and Jiro--now I'm having "Kikaider" flashbacks XD

    Well, no one's dead, yet, and they know where they are, at least. Optimistic, and at the same time ominous... Or something like that.

    And I've decided: I'm going to do a sketch of our poor Sabie, since it looks like he's going to kick it, and he's in my head anyhow. So, at some point, I'll share that with you, okay? ^__^ I look forward to how the Shinobis' search goes!
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  • From kerbear on February 05, 2008
    Its about time they find Hiei and his son.Yusuke as a great teacher but boy he has a lot to learn about demon world.Nice going with the way Kurama and Yusuke finally got it together.Poor Hiei still has alot to go through I fear.Very nicely done on the chapters so far and I can't wait for the next set.
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