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Reviews for MISSING YOU

By : ShioriFoxiesMom
  • From ANON - tk04 on March 28, 2013
    Good to hear they have happen ending. I kind hoping it didn't end. Oh well thank you.
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  • From cariboume2 on April 14, 2011
    All that I can say is Oh My God! The showers of praise that I rain upon you and your literary genius are biblical in proportion. I never read YuYu Hakusho fan fiction before, yours is the first and now I am afraid that I cant read anyone else’s. I get one set paring in my mind and then I see any others as some sick form of adultery. Well Hiei and Kurama are it! I appreciate your commitment to finishing your stories. I have noticed that many of the better writers start work then don’t finish. Thank you for being an exception to that rule. Also, I love that you referenced Kelis’ song in one of your works. It is a favorite of mine.
    Please keep writing and I promise I will keep reading!!!!

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  • From kitsuneprincess on August 29, 2009
    OMG! omg omg i LOVE this story!!!! it was so GOOD!!!
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  • From ANON - Kaibasmom on June 10, 2009
    Well, a year has past since I have read your work and this was a beautiful story to come back to! I have never once been dissappointed with your writing and I am so thankful that you choose to share your talent with others. Thank you so much for another wonderful story.
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  • From wyntermist70 on May 07, 2009
    loved it nuff said
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  • From 66Hiei08 on March 16, 2009
    I can honestly say this is one story I hated to see end. Seriously. It was very well done.
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  • From Kula on February 21, 2009
    I am always so happy to see a new chapter from you, thank you for the great love stories you write between these two.
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  • From ANON - xkuramaxhieix on February 21, 2009
    I've always been a fan of your works, but there was something about this recent chapter that irked me. ):

    "The air began to crackle as smoke began to swirl around Kurama. All six women shivered when a deadly cold voice came through the smoke. “I warned you to release my lover! Now feel the power of the master of plant manipulation!” "

    This part here, is kind of like a line from those cheesy movies that makes your skin crawl because you know it's cheesy. Especially the last sentence. I think, that one, was the worst out of the mini paragraph.

    "As the smoke dissipated revealing the legendary Youko, his energy flared with a loud bang. The nymphs screamed when the ground beneath them shook as every one of their plants exploded. Before their screams died, Kurama’s plants had reclaimed the temple grounds."

    This needs a bit more detail because shortening it like this makes it sound really......well,....lame.

    "In one swift movement, Kurama drew his rose whip and killed the leader and the other nymph holding Hiei. As Kurama rushed to him, Yusuke fired his spirit gun. With one swing of his sword, Kuwabara struck down a fourth nymph. From Kurama’s arms, Hiei watched in amazement as Yukina sent shards of ice at a fifth nymph, slicing her to pieces."

    This one just needs a lot more detail. Or it should be made to be part of a new chapter itself because then you can add more detail. I really think it just needs more detail.
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  • From ANON - jingko on February 13, 2009
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! you can't leave us there!!!!!!! please!!!! more!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 13, 2009
    What type of papers? What PLAN??????

    All i want to know is when will Kurama ditch the brod?
    Sounds like it might be soon ^^

    And what is wrong with Hiei?? Pleace Tell Us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From mhmartini on February 01, 2009
    GAAAAHHHH!!!! I loved it, but I feel so... guilty about that! You know I want Hiei and Kurama to be together. It's my OTP. Heck, I can find irrefutable proof that Hiei and Kurama belong together in anything! But I feel so awkward wanting them to be with each other with the whole Maya situation. Ack!!!! You've put them (and us readers) in such as sticky place! I NEED MORE!!!!!!

    I love your Shiori. She's such a great woman, accepting Maya into the family regardless of her opinions on her son's marriage, helping out when Maya needed a hand, and now saying what she did to Kurama in the hospital. She's simply perfect. I also love how you had Kurama so close to snapping when he spoke to his mom and how snappy his responses were. Stretched fox is a wonderful thing. Angsty stretched fox is even better, and you're quickly capturing that, too. I can't wait to see how this plays out. I have little theories in my mind of ways this could be made to work, but alas, I just ahve to wait for your next update.

    PS-by the way, your story likes to haunt me. I think about it at the most inconvenient times (work, trying to sleep, trying to concentrate on some real life things). Please consider that a compliment; not many stories can wriggled into my mind quite like that, and your certainly has.
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  • From ANON - Sandra on February 01, 2009
    Great, as always, but I want Kurama and Hiei to REALLY be together, without Maya.
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  • From LadyLaran on January 28, 2009
    Ok..makes me wonder if Maya got herself pregnant with another male's child. However, how did Kurama get involved? More!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hemamal on January 26, 2009
    Oooh, did Hiei hear that? I can't wait to find out.
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  • From ANON - bob on January 25, 2009
    Another interesting story, I have nothing original to say so I'll say the usual keep up the good work and I can't wait until you update!
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