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I love this. There aren't enough Yomi/Kurama FICS out there. Please continue this! Your writing is wonderful.

Loves it! I'm such a Yomi fan. Keep this up, please!

I love it. I love Yomi and Kurama together, I am semi-hiatus with my own because mine is one of those weaker ones that I mentioned last time lol!

I also like the imagery you use and how...I don't know what the word is but it's basically well written, contains a lot of description which a lot of people forget is key, the good descriptions that is. A lot of people would just say for example a room. Room of what? Brick? Metal? Leaves? And it sounds weird but I like the real description...and then you've got Yomi's sadism which I adore anyway :D

I can honestly say I'm looking forward to your next update.

Zx

It's an interesting start, the usual difficulty that most people don't think about is how to render Kurama powerless. There is usually a half baked attempt halfway through the actual story and it fails, but it makes sense here, although if this demon believed Kurama to be a human I don't see the reason for poisoning him but hey its your story lol! ‘This isn’t any random attack, this is too improvised," you're contradicting yourself here. This isn't a random attack means that this is a planned attack, however to improvise means to make it up as you go along.

Looking forward to an update.
Zx