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Reviews for Unbalanced Pendulum

By : EmbersEye
  • From Kaibasmom on October 05, 2007
    Just wanted to let you know that I love this story. I have been reading for quite a while and so hopes it has a happy ending.
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  • From ANON - comicfancat on November 12, 2006
    Chapter 17 was an eye opener for both of them ,I think.So was it the crow Kurama saw in the market place unknown to both of them?And how is Hiei going to handle falling in love with the fox or is he just going to ignore it and give him over for the money.?Can't wait to see what else is going to happen,though it looks like you've forgotten this story because you have not updated in a long time.Hope whatever is stopping you is to bad and you can come back to this story soon
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  • From ANON - JemnenyCricket on August 26, 2006
    Now THAT'S a story!

    I am genuinly impressed with your writing - you slip so smoothly from one perspective to another, never once tripping on it, or making the reader feel a hiccough. And the way you remained true to the characters personalities *while* showing change and growth... not to mention how you keep us guessing at all times who's out to get whom.. well.. it's just fabulous. I'm sure I sound like I'm gushing now, but I'm just really impressed with the quality of this work. I mean.. I don't even usually *Like* Hiei and Kurama pairings in any way, shape, or form - but your plot made me suspend my previous prejudices about how I viewed the characters, and you made them into your own unique versions.

    Plus, I had some really good laughs along the way, which is always appreciated. Most recently, the Kurama-yawn. How adorable! Haha.

    Alright, enough rambling. I just stayed up until 2am because once I started reading, I couldn't stop...
    *applauds*
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  • From BlueUtopiah on August 25, 2006
    I can't tell you how excited I was to see that you added another chapter to this! I love your writing - it's very epic, very dense, and your creativity is off the charts. There are stories out there that make me forget that I'm reading fanficiton, and this as well as A Well Too Deep are two of those stories.

    So many things about this chapter: The slow analysis of feelings toward the other on either side, both admitting to themselves that they have fallen and fallen hard. Karasu's brief appearance and how it unnerves Kurama even though he doesn't know that it's Karasu. The masterful addition of Mr. Bolyx and The Holy Arthur - I really do love the power and history that Hiei has in the Makai - you could probably write a whole novel on his rise to power. The description of the rooms, and then the final scene where Hiei and Youko lie against each other and declare that they've become too involved to ignore their feelings any longer, and how they declare those feelings by saying they hate the other.

    The plot really moved along in this chapter, and I liked the change from forest to village. I can't wait to see the final confrontation with Karasu and I'm sure it won't be pretty.
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  • From ANON - Vile Deadboss on July 19, 2006
    Hmm, I hope you haven't given up on this Fic. it would be nice to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - GS* on October 05, 2005
    awwwwwwww its shooo shweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant get enough of ur writtings! argh shoo good!!!!! and umm no not really ahha. dont really know where the worg Angra came from. where? XD but plz update shoon!! ah i hope they get 2gether in the next chappi or soon at least!
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  • From ANON - Evelyn on October 03, 2005
    ^^ okey,
    1) No, of course I didnt get the connection between Karasu and the crow! Im no where near being able to make connections in my head! lol. Im not good with symbolism...
    2) Nope, never heard of anything named Angra before, or if you just made it up to have some meaning to Hiei, the best I can come up with is angry. ^^' Heh, heh, I feel retarded in comparison to you...
    3) This is the greatest story Ive ever read on any fanfic site! (I know I may say that to other stories, but that's just cause sometimes I forget this one exists. I really mean it with this one)
    4) I hope after you finish reading this review you feel really good, because you deserve it!
    Eve
    PS- If you arent already, you should become an author for real.
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  • From ANON - Kodaijin Hiei on September 29, 2005
    You stumped me, where? o_o; -gives her pocky and the soundtrack to yyh where they sing!- ^_^ Yey a nother awsome chapter I love reading this story it is so good. n.n
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  • From BlueUtopiah on September 29, 2005
    I know that I'm up for 100 lashes, since I'm a fan of this story, but have not reviewed before. I do apologize... Your writing is wonderfully dark, and it has such depth - something that is rarely found in fanfiction. When I read your stories, I actually feel like I'm reading a novel, it surpasses the category of "fanfiction", and I felt that this was a terrific chapter. I've been enjoying how both Hiei and Kurama, who were definite in their feeling and goals, are becoming confused, the lines they've drawn are now muddled. You've carved out their relationship so carefully over these chapters, and in this one especially, walls are breaking down and it's amazing to watch.






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  • From mhmartini on September 28, 2005
    Well now, this is getting interesting. Will Hiei be able to turn his kitsune over to the crow? Let's face it: Kurama is his kitsune right now. Even if the fox deludes himself, they have some bond going on. I think it's sweet, yet stinging at the same time.

    I really look forward to your next update.
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  • From CrimsonFox234 on September 28, 2005
    Yay! Another great chapter. The characters are becoming incredibly sweet, which i hadn't expected, but I absolutely love. I hope Hiei doesn't really have to give Kurama to Karasu, because the fox seems like he really is starting to like Hiei, and not just manipulating him anymore.
    Hm... Angra... Um, Anagram? That's the only word that comes to mind. It sounds Celtic, but I don't really know that language and I'm more than likely pronouncing the name wrong, so never mind.
    Anyway, please update soon, I need to know what happens with them!
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  • From hColleen on September 28, 2005
    Wow...there's a lot in that chapter...very good...I really don't know what else to say...I had more thoughts while reading it, but now they've flown away. Poor Hiei! Interesting how Kurama compared being caught to Hiei's dislike for the rain...makes the koorime think a little more about what he's doing. I can see their developing emotions...but what of Karasu...I look forward to your next update.
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  • From ANON - viridianmagpie on September 20, 2005
    crow - Karasu: I did in an abstract sort of way. It was along the lines of 'hmmm, crow... that reminds me: wasn't Karasu the one who hired Hiei? *ponder*' (er, it's been a bit since I read the first few chapters).

    in regards to chapter 14: a hunt! I think I enjoyed that waaayyy too much. it's one of my kinks. *g*. One of my favourite chapters so far.

    good work!
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  • From ANON - GS* on September 08, 2005
    i absolutly love ur writting style! ahh soo good. and no not really hahaha. untill u told me that is. XP. i'm a bit slow in the head. anyway. i really wanna c wut happens next. and poor Kurama and Hiei. TnT. update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kodaijin Hiei on September 06, 2005
    Hey do you have like a way to tell people you updated? And Im not sure If I can get it to show but to make things italic/bold you must do [ and if that didnt work I probably look like a idiot trying to show you. Its the same html as p, but with a i or b, though you must close it by doing the same with a /i or /b and >> Srry If you already knew or something -walks of confused and such- o_o
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