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Reviews for ENEMY AMONG US

By : ShioriFoxiesMom
  • From cirrus74 on March 07, 2010
    A little typo - it's seme not semi.

    But anyway, I'd just like to say that I really enjoyed this story and thank you for writing it. At times, I felt it was a little weird that Kurama called Hiei by pet names but of course that's only imho.

    Also, you might need a little help with naming if you're going after Japanese names. Children are usually not named after districts in Japan.

    But the story was really fun to read ^___^
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  • From cirrus74 on March 07, 2010
    Don't know if anyone's told you, but Hiei's Dark Eye is called Jagan, not Jagon.
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  • From ANON - ruthie balboa on January 08, 2010
    I like a lot of your stories. As usual, good job. I really like most of your work. The last few chapters seemed to be a different part of the story all together but that's okay. I thought that some of the drama and Shane were a nice addition, even if you make Hiei sound too mushy at parts. However, besides those mushy instances, you don't take the characters much beyond canon, which is nice. You make Kurama a bit over dramatic but it seems like he might be over dramatic in private. Anyway, again, great job. Your sex scenes are also getting better and better with each story so please write a new story soon. I love your stories and have read most of them. I know this is one of your older stories but I still like it. Keep writing please! I really enjoy your work. I hope I fed your muses for you. Also, it would be neat if you did a story/drabble of the intricate relationship Korunue and Hiei must have sharing one vessel. I know Hiei is the reincarnated version of Korunue but it still seems that they would annoy each other a whole lot.
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  • From wrongonsomanylevels on January 17, 2009
    omg the parts with sakura made me feel like i was watching an episode of yu yu hakusho. as always u did a wonderful job.
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  • From ANON - Megan on April 06, 2008
    wha...wha...what??? kill hiei? what!?
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  • From ANON - Megan on April 06, 2008
    awesome ending line! lol!
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  • From ANON - Megan on April 06, 2008
    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!
    man this is so sweet.
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  • From ANON - Megan on April 06, 2008
    Dude! I seriously just slapped my hand over my mouth when I relaized who Sakura was talking about! DAMN!
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  • From on March 06, 2008
    that is a great story!
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  • From ANON - LadyShadowDragon on February 16, 2008
    as always I love your stories. I really liked the epilog and you could write an entire separate story of Shane's growing up and their life in the Makai after they move. I hope that you continue to post your stories, they are my pick me up whenever I'm down, I have read all of your stories posted on this site many times.
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  • From ANON - kerbear on February 15, 2008
    Very well done.And a very nice ending.As always you do/did a great job.
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  • From Hemamal on February 15, 2008
    Awesomeness in a can!!! Perfect ending!
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  • From kerbear on February 06, 2008
    Please add the epilog

    Well done as always
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  • From sonykit on February 05, 2008
    this was a good conclusion to the story. a happy ending after all the trials they went through. fluff after the rough. the bonding ritual was a whole new take on demon mating, very nice and really showed their devotion and love for each other. nice once. ;)
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  • From Hemamal on February 04, 2008
    Awesome ending!!!!! Love, love, love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish I was Hiei right now. Having both Youko and Kurama seeing to his needs has to be a dream come true!
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